Reviews for The Dissolution Law
Guest chapter 6 . 1/22
TPalesh chapter 6 . 1/24
Gods... this was so intense that it made me crying. Beautiful work!
Lady Reese Kightkens chapter 6 . 1/17
Hauntingly beautiful! There are no other words to describe this work of art. You did a fantastic job in only six chapters. The last chapter brought tears to my eyes and kept me on edge. I am in love with this fiction. It gives enough, but with holds delicately as well. You certainly know how to captivate an audience.
Aviva Aria chapter 6 . 12/21/2015
This is one of the most heart wrenching, beautiful stories I have ever read. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/16/2015
Very angsty! I love it! Although i would have like the happy ending a bit longer to get rid of that lingering sadness...
Jessie Deal chapter 6 . 10/7/2015
These weren't her worse memories. These were her best.
This story was so beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Thank you for this.
0.0' Kahli hime chapter 6 . 9/22/2015
Oh boy. ... this was so intense... loved it!
alizeta chapter 6 . 8/29/2015
It's a very nice fanfic about this thema, very original, I liked it very much.
AP.Violin chapter 6 . 5/10/2015
I am shedding tears like a fountain here! OH MY GOD that was amazing!
Xiaou Nem chapter 6 . 4/26/2015
It was great! It feels very realistic and very heartbreaking. I like the idea of her three suitors.
mirela.rat.7 chapter 6 . 4/26/2015
Beautiful story
Guest chapter 6 . 4/4/2015
This was really well-written and I couldn't help liking it. But at the same time, I really don't think you can claim that they would be happy at the end of this. He was awful to her, and yes, he could say it was for 'her own good' but there are far far less cruel ways to ensure that the marriage was dissolved - he could have worked with her and her friends for one. I can understand him being silent / acting like he didn't care, but he was actively mean to her, and I just can't see them being happy together after.
mexicantt chapter 6 . 3/24/2015
As much as I enjoy your writing, this is a fic I just can't like.

Theirs was an extremely abusive marriage. His psychological torment of her would have left permanent scars, and everything else he did before pales - absolutely pales - in comparison to his systematic, conscious torture of the woman who sought to save him from wasting away in prison. While his anger at being tied to someone against his will was understandable, his subsequent maltreatment of Hermione is not.

He should have left her alone when she told him to, there in the hospital, and allowed her a chance to truly heal from injuries he inflicted.
meg527 chapter 6 . 2/5/2015
Absolutely fantastic! Thank you!
Sassyluv chapter 6 . 1/29/2015
That was full of emotion - my throat was tight and tears welled several times. Really well-written.
Sassyluv xxx
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