|Reviews for The Dissolution Law|
| Xiaou Nem chapter 6 . 4/26
It was great! It feels very realistic and very heartbreaking. I like the idea of her three suitors.
| mirela.rat.7 chapter 6 . 4/26
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/4
This was really well-written and I couldn't help liking it. But at the same time, I really don't think you can claim that they would be happy at the end of this. He was awful to her, and yes, he could say it was for 'her own good' but there are far far less cruel ways to ensure that the marriage was dissolved - he could have worked with her and her friends for one. I can understand him being silent / acting like he didn't care, but he was actively mean to her, and I just can't see them being happy together after.
| mexicantt chapter 6 . 3/24
As much as I enjoy your writing, this is a fic I just can't like.
Theirs was an extremely abusive marriage. His psychological torment of her would have left permanent scars, and everything else he did before pales - absolutely pales - in comparison to his systematic, conscious torture of the woman who sought to save him from wasting away in prison. While his anger at being tied to someone against his will was understandable, his subsequent maltreatment of Hermione is not.
He should have left her alone when she told him to, there in the hospital, and allowed her a chance to truly heal from injuries he inflicted.
| meg527 chapter 6 . 2/5
Absolutely fantastic! Thank you!
| Sassyluv chapter 6 . 1/29
That was full of emotion - my throat was tight and tears welled several times. Really well-written.
| Assasin Nero chapter 6 . 12/24/2014
great fic, loved it.
| RosieShak11 chapter 6 . 11/17/2014
This is brilliant.
| EwigeStudentin chapter 6 . 10/19/2014
Fascinating! The angst and misery were so palpable right until the last chapter that the reading was almost painful. I'm glad the situation resolved itself - his and her motivations were very in character. I particularly enjoyed you Lucius, and tall, dark and handsome George was very refreshing too.
What a great story all around! I'd love to translate it in Russian.
| EwigeStudentin chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Wow, what a powerful beginning. Love the image of George in black as well as Snape being spotted by paparazzi :) Snape seems to be such a bastard here,, just the way I like him. I wonder what you are going to do with this set up.
| sookienorthman94 chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
When i first read CoMC I was instantly mesmirized, the plot had me hooked and your writing is truly an infinity in its own. But this story captured, held, broke and shattered my heart and then gave my such a Epic love filled, tormenting ending. Thank you, you are a gift to HP FF and should be given a Order of merlin, first class.
| RhodaBush chapter 6 . 8/27/2014
I cry when I reread this story
| rebeccakelsey chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
This was a very interesting take on the Marriage Law. I really appreciated it.
Kindness is the best accessory,
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Wow, just wow. All the emotion in the story is ... wow. Well written.
| drasticactions chapter 5 . 7/30/2014
I swear every time I re-read this I cry, but it is really such a lovely story , you write this so well I feel my heartbreak for her I can't describe it in words.