|Reviews for Of Pineapples and Kings|
| scipio96 chapter 1 . 1/27
Haha the Pineapple boy! He's adorable XD And so clever, with the spikes and all. Awesome story; you always write such good funny Labyrinth fics XD :D
| Jacquelyn chapter 1 . 1/15
Hey I liked your story. It has some intriguing parts. It might be best to remember though for the next time you write something Halloween inspired that they were missing an important element in their trick or treating escapades though. They needed a child. At least in the area of the Western United States where I live, even older teenagers and definitely young adults who come trick or treating without a child with them maybe denied at the door, where if they have a child with them they often receive treats as well. Now it is also important to note that the trick part of trick or treating isn't held up where I live, in part due to vandalism laws and in part due to the culture, but still. Anyway just an idea.
I'm newly exploring this fandom and your stories thus far have been fun to read. Oh and this is a little out of place, but I love Skeep.
| Nowriting chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Lovely easy reading. Thanks.
| Bloodsired chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
As always great story. Funny and there I say Romantic I could count it as a date. :D The pineapple boy is so clever with his costume & the ladybug girl is soo cute! I symphatize with you about Halloween, though.
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Cute. Nicely done.
| AliBelly chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This is perfection :D
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Sap. And funnies. And hormones, can't forget those.
I liked the Pineapple Boy. And what a cute little ladybug.
| Lozzarooni chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
If you're not already writing for a comedy show, then why the hell not? I would absolutely love to be able to write comedy like this - it's gold, and if Labyrinth was ever turned into a comedy like Friends, then you know damn well something like this would be happening all the time. This is the second of your stories that I've read and once again I've laughed myself silly, particularly at Jareth's comment about his Butterfinger and Sarah's list about him being an S&M fiend and having a riding crop but no horse was priceless.
| RubyGloom7 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
"Madam, you have thirteen seconds in which to give us treats before I resort to egging your house as tradition demands."
| Honoria Granger chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Only just found this. Completely delicious, and I laughed so hard I bounced the laptop off my tummy. You are an absolutely splendid writer and without a doubt the funniest I have so far encountered here. Please never stop writing. Thank you a million times over!
| MaidMarian17 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I loved this story! Goblin orgies...not sure if I should be laughing or utterly horrified. Mix of both i think. So funny!
| Chasing darkness chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Normally I am loathe to leave feedback on a story posted so many years ago. My thought being that you won't give a rat's patootie anymore. Yet it is my pleasure to acknowledge your mastery of witty banter. It was a very charming read.
| Kypriothe chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
"Would you like an appendage?" I DIED. You have killed me with laughter. (That's the best way, I guess)
You have also spoiled me with your representation of Jareth. I find myself comparing others' portrayals with yours... yours always wins... how on earth do you manage to portray him so damn perfectly?
| FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
| Arciere chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Lovely. Absolutely Lovely.