|Reviews for Bella has a cousin|
| skarpia chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
Haha lol, poor mackenzie..so sad :'(
tht must be super hard to deal with..
| bundysarah chapter 6 . 8/31/2009
| Kenzie chapter 6 . 4/10/2009
Very cute!My name is mackenzie also
| Literaryluminations chapter 6 . 11/26/2008
Just dropping a review...
First, give the animals and your mother/father a hug for me!
Second, you have a very interesting story. You seem to have a good plot line, and your grammar has gotten MUCH better since the last time I read it. (I believe that was in first grade... something about the Spy Kids ice skating... ;-))
I don't see why you are keeping the rating as M, because I haven't seen anything that makes me think M. But hey, it's your story.
I also noticed a couple of grammatical things you might want to watch out for.
Luv Ya Step-sistah!
| Keleals chapter 6 . 11/20/2008
this story is cute, and funny. Please post more
| twilightsparky101 chapter 5 . 10/31/2008
Rachel i love the story it may be really dhort but its just really cute. As your newly assigned Beta i think you sould make macknzi fall in love or something and make her a complete slut. hala. I absolutely loved the little authers note you left me. Now i feel really loved and special. I hope we get a whole lot of candy tonight. you know you should make Mackenzi friends with Alice. She also kind of reminds me of myself. Ahh the good old days when the economy was a lot better. My dad still owes my my at the most 50,0 and at the least 5,0 dollar shopping spree plus anotheer 400 dollars added to my credit card for loosing a pound. Yay me. I also think rodrigo likes me back because
| Keleals chapter 2 . 10/30/2008
how old is Mackenzie? Otherwise it looks good please hurry with the next chapter