Reviews for Fire Shadow's Son
Serendipity chapter 11 . 8/22/2013
Now this chapter made me think: what would Sasuke do if someone killed Itachi before he could?
Someone like Naruto?
Or (hehehehehHAHAHA) Sakura?
What? It could happen. One could punch from Shippuden Sakura could kill just about anyone (except, like, Orochimaru, but he doesn't really count).
Anyway, Sasuke'd probably go COMPLETELY BATSHIT.
What's the measure of an avenger without a target?
And (oh hell) what if that person came back and told him that Itachi had still loved him? That they'd take. Away his chance at revenge AND his brother's attempt at redemption?

The more things change, the more they stay the same, it seems.
Serendipity chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
Well that was adorable.

I'm always interested in how Danzo is portrayed in older fics, before his fight with Sasuke showed just how dangerous he could be. Sometimes he's weak, sometimes he's dumb, and once or twice he's actually had a Sharingan or Byakugan under all this bandages. I've never seen him with the Mokuton, though, which is understandable. That came entirely out of left field.
So, I wonder how he'll be in this one.
duchessme chapter 26 . 8/15/2013
was that the end since there was an epilogue?i luv the written
ImaginationJunkie1412 chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
Hm, good chapter. :) I'm feeling a little depressed now, though. I absorb the feelings generated in the chapter I'm reading. An annoying trait sometimes, like for this chapter, because now I have to go read something else or somehow brighten my mood before reading on, otherwise I'll get depressed. *small smile*

I'm finding this fic to be... unexpected. It feels weird to read Minato that way, all depressed and down and whatnot, but it does make sense for him to be that way since Kushina isn't there.
ImaginationJunkie1412 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Hi there. *waves* The author I beta for praised this story so here I am. :)

So far I'm under the impression that the Yondaime lives without timetravel... I don't normally go for stories where this is the case, but as of right now I am extremely curious to see how this plays out.
Queen of Spades England chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 26 . 7/29/2013

Thanks for the story!
Looking forward to the sequel!
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
chidori through the chest eh teme?
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
manga-neko-96 chapter 26 . 7/19/2013
I loved it! I think you had an ideal length for the description of the kumo chunin exams. Great job!
manga-neko-96 chapter 18 . 7/19/2013
Amazing job with the memories. It really gives the story depth.
littlechirp chapter 4 . 7/19/2013
I probably should read further before asking, but I'm really, really confused.

1. Why does Naruto call his father jiji?
2. Why does Sasuke call Naruto an orphan?
3. Why is Naruto's surname Uzumaki?

- I thought that they might be keeping Naruto's heritage a secret to others but then... -

4. If so, why does Naruto live with his dad?
5. If so, why can't anybody else notice their similarities?

And also...

6. What happened to Orochimaru at the Sand-Sound attack? There was no Sandaime to seal off his arms... did Minato go against him? Orochimaru can't be dead cos otherwise well Sasuke won't escape. But his arms can't be sealed off cos then Minato would be dead.

manga-neko-96 chapter 17 . 7/19/2013
I love the detective theme. It's always puzzled me why no one figured out Naruto's jinchuriki status earlier.
fingers-falling-upwards chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Can I just say thank you right here and now for an In-Character Kakashi? Sorry, I've just read so many fics recently where he leaves Naruto to die, blah blah, OUT OF CHARACTER. This was just such a breath of air, thank you. :}
Lilyzinha chapter 26 . 7/2/2013
I really enjoy, actually loved your story and how you built it! I just found it so awesome and i love that Minato is alive i think his one of my favorite character in Naruto , too bad doesn't have much of him! I would love if you write a sequel with shippudden ,i would like to see Minato addition to the story !
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