Reviews for Paper Hearts
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
OMG... my heart is breaking for Edward.. as if he didn't hate himself and his life enough already... X and poor Kellan... I always thought the idea of Edward having a son was so cute...

I almost cried at the part where Edward broke down and Carlisle carried him home... 2 great father-son relationships...
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 4 . 11/5/2008
loved it!
PinkDrink chapter 4 . 11/5/2008
I just have to say that I love LOVE love all of your story's, they are so origional and different... lol all in all your a good fanfic writer... I can't wait for more chapters on this story and Hands of Sorrow.. hint-hint-cought-nudge-nudge! LOl Update again soon!
barbiedoll123 chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
aw eedward is crazy about bella that is so sweet
Maddy chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
The father-son moment at the end had me in tears.. their bond is just so special and you did a good job portraying it...

I also love the little things! I love how Jasper's Grandpa comment and Carlisle's response.. and how Edward wrote OUCH on the bandaid...cute!

"Yes, but if you're in my arms I won't try to kill him." - man... only Edward could pull off being a good guy and a bad-ass... *sigh* love that line
drama88queen95 chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
Oh My Gosh! This is Amazing! I cannot get it out of my head no matter how hard I try! Everything is perfect and makes complete sense! You have to update as soon as you possibly can!
latuacantante4him chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
I feel so bad for Edward. One thing I hope this Edward does is change Bella if she asks and not be a butt about it.
u2ugly2nv chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
loved this that edward knows how bella feels, he should pursue her.. she is nothing like emma.
latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 11/4/2008
I'm glad he is giving in. Looking forward to more.
Amy104 chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
I liked the chapter..i was confused at the start cause it was jasper talking to him at the end of chapter 2 and then it was him and bella on a street or something i was just confused about the shift.

But past that part i really enjoyed the chapter!
Maddy chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
Edward thinking of his son makes me want to cry! *sniff* I've always wanted Edward to have a son more than a daughter.. I'm in the minority, I suppose...

"So how did it go?" Alice asked.

"I won't tell you," Edward said with a grin, "the suspense will kill you."

- haha... I love it.. they are SUCH SIBLINGS
barbiedoll123 chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
suck it up edward it is inevitable you are just destined to be with bella,just go with it
xDreamOn'94 chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
loved it!
u2ugly2nv chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
nice update.. once he see's that bella will love him inspite of him being a vampire
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