Reviews for At Babel
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
You –– you –– you! GAHHHHHH now you've made me cry!
If I told you I hate you, would you still know I love you?
Omigods. I –– can't –– get myself together now. I'm crying and I can't stop and I don't know why. You just did them so perfectly and so awesomely and I LOVE IT...
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"I haven't slept. There's a child outside."
"You haven't slept because there's a child outside?" Watari's voice sounds incredulous.
L shakes his head. "No, they are two separate statements. If I couldn't sleep because a child was outside, I would simply have brought him inside."
–– Perfect perfect perfect perfect. Just like L.

HOW THE HADES DO YOU KEEP THEM SO IC?! IT MAKES ME LAUGH AND CRY AND EVERYTHING!
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*sniffs*
I love you.
'Nuff said.
inkedvigilante chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Purely Adorable!
I love the descriptive beginning and all the character interactions! Their rationships were really well done! And the imagery you've set in for this is well wrtten! Kudos!
The-Otaku-Pervert chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
AWWWWWW I love this :3
Annibell12 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I like how you portrayed Mello! My only complaint is that they get to choose their names, and I always thought it was sort of an alphabetical thing. But really, that's just opinion. And Mello choosing a name *was* cute. Overall, well done.
Annibell12 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I like how you portrayed Mello! My only complaint is that they get to choose their names, and I always thought it was sort of an alphabetical thing. But really, that's just opinion. And Mello choosing a name *was* cute. Overall, well done.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
loved it.
chou-fleur chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I like how you write witty, snarky L. Great job! _
T chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!
FireCookie chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
lol,i wouldnt mind if you continue this,thatd be awsome :3
DarogaDaae chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Epic. Awesome. Fantastic.

But DAMMIT, L!1!
Azureila chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
W0W.

Bravo, Bialy-san! XD I actually read this for numerous times before I write down this review. Just... this fic is so elegant and IC and deserves better treatment. Ah, I'm babbling without further ado, let's begin...

I really, really love the way you write L, Watari, Mello and Near. They are extremely adorable, and stay true to their nature. L's fond of Watari and vice versa. It's very nice, picturing they have moments beyond solving cases and such. Also, the contradicting arrival of Mello and Near! XD How fitting, Mello is more dramatic and unpredictable, while Near is calm and collected.

There are subleties and deep undertones here and there, what I love the most is brotherhood! LMelloNear. It's understable if L's instantly develop interest towards Mello. I always get the feeling that L is more open when he's with Mello, mostly after reading some pivotal parts of Another Note. Their bedroom-banter is priceless! 3 3 3

*sigh* I can't help but falling in love with MelloNear all over again and again as I read the final part. Those two are sleeping peacefully! XD L's thoughts about them being still children somehow make me sad, because it is right, they really are; but they must deal with difficult issues in the near future, especially after L's death.

Thank you for sharing this story, Bialy-san. Death Note fandom needs more good writers like you. Enough of plotless porn and OOC-ness, enough of those kind of garbage.

Ganbatte ne!

Regards,

SheilaLuv
padsy chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
L is very much in character, and somehow I've always thought he was more interested in Mello than Near.

Very well written. I like it a lot. :)
Shella chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Brilliant awesome wonderful thrilling captivating funny and LOVE.

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bishieholic chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I like this! Oh man do I ever. In-character, sweet, funny, and the way Mello comes up with his name is simply awesome.

Will definitely read more of your fics!
WamprickNyx chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
It's not fair, really. I'm putting this one in my favourites as well. My favourites will end up full with all of your stories if you keep writing like this, you know. So keep writing. Really, do keep writing because FFNet needs wonderful writers like you. Heck, I need to read all these good stuff you write!

I've never read a more realistic L or Watari before. That's almost like Ooba (or was it Ohba? o.o') wrote the dialogue, they are so in character that I can't really believe it. Or, well, I think I can't believe it but I do. Yup, weird, I know.

You have a way with words, they aren't forced upon, just so natural, like flowing, you know? Well, I can't really explain what I mean, but hey, English isn't my native language and I have a bit difficulty with words considering my lack of vocab no matter how hard I try so... Whatever. I'm rambling again. Just, as I mentioned before, you are awesome and keep going.

your devoted fan

nyxiee

P.S: How do you keep them in character? Honestly, is there some kind of secret that you're hiding from the world? Or are you actually Oba and we just don't know it yet?

O.O

Yup, that was random.

I know.

Just forget it.
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