have to agree..J/T kissing so much better then chocolate..loved it

so sweet..hugs

Well, I'm not really sure who John, Teyla, and Rodney are. I'm assuming that they are characters of Stargate. Am I right in that assumption? Anyway, this was the first of your fanfictions that I read and I liked it. It was a nice romantic Halloween story. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories.

Aw, cute! Great job! That was a really sweet story!

amazingly adorable ) jt chocolate the best fluff sweetness ever

This is a sweet story. I must admit I never thought of John and Teyla together this way. But if she isn't with her baby's father, I guess anything could happen.

What a fun and great halloween story. The candy and all of it is just darling. I love John and Teyla's interaction here. So cute and charming. Wonderful job. Thanks for sharing.

Oh, this was cute. The only thing that threw me off was Teyla using contractions because she doesn't really use them in the show. Otherwise, great job.

The story was pure delicious fluff! It would have been perfect with some dark chocolate instead.

Well, that was so sweet I may have to spend an hour on the treadmill to burn off the calories.

Nice job, N.

So cute! JT and Chocolate!

*claps wildly*

I love Halloween fluffy sweetness - especially when it involves John and Teyla! Cute!