Reviews for Interlude (A Remake)
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
ah yes much more descriptive, alot naughtier, but defiantly more descriptive. Details, details, it's all in the details isn't it. Very nice redo by the way.
trigger12 chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
woah! thats an awsome difference! more detail, longer and defenetly better written! God, youve improved incredibly! is the older one still here?
Jovianokami chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Hey, that was great! It was so better then the first one with so much more detail and happing going on.
Cody Furlong chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
It's really nice, the ending suggests more. Will there be more?