Reviews for Cosplay
connielkm chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Steamy and lovey. Nice story.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Brilliant. You captured the characters perfectly.
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Awesome Story Please Continue
Midori-Sensei chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
My my I dont think Ive ever read a lemon quite like this. It was described so nicely, and I really liked the idea XD Thanks for the fantastic read
colorfulsunrise514 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
This was a fabulous story. Very loving and . . . sexual. :)
darkwhispersdale chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Very sweet love your work you should do more Jx
Rhiulan chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Wow, this is like my favorite story. Instant favorite. It was very well written, and I'm going to go read some more of your stories after I finish typing this, lol. Oh, and on another note, you should write a sequel of sorts with Fujino and Kuga cosplaying Viola and Kruger, that was be very awesome. :D
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
kudos for the sex scene

but looking through your stories,

the sex scenes in most, if not all, of your stories are rather emotional and fluffy in an almost corny/cheesy way

no offense, but a little drama might be a good change of pace

and what's with all the crying?

i mean, it's sweet the first time, but after a while it would kind of cliche

i mean, if my girlfriend cried emotionally everytime we have sex, i would think that i'm seriously lacking in that department

anyways, i hope this doesn't offend you in any way. just offering my opinion
Nykonyx chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Well... are you still sure the rating M was caused by Shizuru? I think Natsuki had a rather large role in it's success. _ LOL, I enjoyed this very much. Especially after hearing that rather ironic (to me) role they were going to cosplay. Haha.

Thanks, I completely enjoyed this.

-Akira .
windtamer01 chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
pure smut smut smut smut. oh. and more smut! wahahha!
Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 1/30/2009






Zomg, it was PERFECT! You hit upon every emotion *perfectly* and clearly, and the scenes were absolutely *wonderful* to read, and it all flowed so seamlessly that the 'cosplay' part, I quite honestly forgot that it *was* just a 'cosplay' bit, and had gotten totally into that whole scene XD

You are a master storyteller, able to weave your stories beautifully, and I am so pleased that I got to read such a delightful story from you today :3

Thanks for writing this! D
arachnidsPlay8oy chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
such an adorable story...*sighs* i wish my first time was like that...xP i was raped by my track i managed to have my 2nd time with my fiancée our first night alone xD
alex-della-robbia chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Awesome story, I always knew natsuki and shizuru would somehow end up together, I definitely want to read more. Will there be more?

If so-Please update soon
kikyo4ever chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
as always, you manage to wow me with shiznat sweetness moment...i can't expect anything more or less from you, just the best. thanks for writing another story...

love how natsuki manage to take shizuru by surprise at the end.."“Once we get there, I plan to take the lovely Shizuru-kaicho-sama and fuck her senseless." hahha...can natsuki really do this? it's all come to leebot to make it happen, writing great smut/birdy-lovelove scene :D

i'm awaiting your other shiznat work
elfspirit7 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
WOW nice one-shot XD! Can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!
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