|Reviews for Half Light|
| thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Oh I really liked it. It was sensual all right but it was done really tastefully. I love how she tried to convince herself over and over again though I'm quite positive that she doesn't even believe herself. It was perfect. Simple, short but definitely really sweet. Fave!
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Well for me the ending wasn't a cheap shot. This is a quite cliche idea, and I am very pleased that you have executed it in a way that is very captivating and unique. You have taken a challenge many others have tried to conquer; and you won unlike many others who didn't. Good for you.
I found this story to possess all the qualities I'd been looking for in a drama shot-sadness, an unfolding plot, inevitability yet a hanging ending. Most shots with this genre just focus only on plain drama, and that makes them tedious.
I'll be waiting for more from you.
| winoa13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
"Aawtss" was the first thing i said after i finished reading! It's...so...i dont know how to explain it but really it was nicely done! I love the way you made the title fit into the story and, the ending left this..."awtts" awwts ouch/hurting thing )) Thanks and more power! xD Goodluck!
I wonder what Mikagami is thinking...
| radcliffe-dreams chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Oh, what can I say but a job well done! The title's appropriate and the story's perfect as well. Just like everyone else, I'm looking forward to a sequel..And the next title would be 'Twilight'? wink* wink*
| waitingstill chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
oh... gosh... that made me really teary-eyed! why oh why does it have to be raiha and not mi-chan! *bawls*
anyway *sniff* nice story *sniff*...
i'll be waiting for your sequel! (sees a ray of light that fuuko and tokiya will still be together *hint* *hint*)
| Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
i haven't been around ffnet for a long time, this is a nice welcome...
i don't think it's a cheap shot..the ending fitted the theme well. but then again that's me, i love open-endings
| yanagichyan chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
u wrote another fic, yay!
and another angsty one.. :( u do enjoy making people cry, don't you? haha, no, no.. it's all good. i enjoyed it tremendously. although is it too much to hope that u'll someday write a happier fic? all this emotional drama isn't good for my blood pressure. ;)
good job! more please!
| kyusetsuki satsuki chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
oh no not raiha...
anyways, well written and i don't mind the adult implications at all... _
| abubi-chan chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
i enjoyed it. all the would've-been and should've-been. i am hoping to hear mi-chan's side though. i know it's going to be more angsty and more dramatic. it always is. ;)
| Eirist chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
dang it! i always love your fics because they have a nice dose and touch of reality. if i had read this one back when i was in the angst mood, i probably would be bawling by now.
all your fics gave me this reaction: it is as if someone reached out inside me and squeezed my heart-painfully. whenever i finish reading your stories, i can't help but be reduced to this sniffing, teary-eyed creature. my hat's off to you! i hope you continue writing such beautiful stories. *bows her head*
excess: i hope the stress of college life doesn't make you go insane. God knows how hard college life is. haha! good luck! i'm looking forward for your future stories.
| lyris chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
good job! I hope to read the next chapter soon more power and inspiration V
| satomika chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
a very nice fic for halloween!
i bet this is a surprise..
and i'm betting MY WHOLE LIFE that you're gonna make a sequel to this where Tokiya and Fuuko end up as partners!
that is a nice trick...
i must say...
good luck to that sequel!
| yuki kawaii chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
hello! welcome back! 6 months is not that long. try 3 years. *bangs head on the wall*
okay, seriously now. this is well-written. I love the details, and the sensual touch was all too good. I wasn't really expecting you to name the groom (it could be anybody), but doing so made everything all the more concrete. argh, girls and their impatience to wait!
but boys have their faults, too. :p
anyway, good job! God bless and i'll see you around. :D
PS: added thisto faves. ;)