|Reviews for Mike Newton Discovered|
| sersmom chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
I guess I got my E/B ending after all. What happened to the epilogue? Did they stay on the island? Fun little story, thanks.
| sersmom chapter 8 . 2/18/2011
I always wondered what would happen if a werewolf was bitten. I've read in other stories that the venom was lethal and they just died, but I don't remember what cannon says.
| sersmom chapter 7 . 2/18/2011
Wow! God job! Mike, a werewolf now. Interesting twist, but now we have everyone injured and Mike in the sea...
| sersmom chapter 5 . 2/18/2011
You almost have a Jacob situation here, with Bella's affections divided. I didn't look to see if this is all-human or not. Clearly Edward is human, but is James? Very good tension you've got going for you, makes me want to get to the next chapter. Good thing I don't have to wait. I sure love stories that are complete!
| sersmom chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
I was looking at Melolabel's favorites list and found your story. I'm still trying to figure out who your pairing (of course I will always go with Edward). I never make Mike out to be a bad guy though so I am liking your depiction so far.
Good job with the writing, especially for your first try. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
| Melolabel chapter 10 . 1/19/2010
Well, I enjoyed the ending. At least everyone is out of mortal peril. Sorry no one else is reviewing.
| Melolabel chapter 9 . 10/26/2009
I love how that sneaky Bella's mind works. Hurry up and tell us what's happening with Mikey.
| Christian Sage chapter 8 . 6/30/2009
Wow, I was totally taken surprise by this chapter!
I loved it, that is so cool how is a wer/vamp mix.
Can't wait for more!
| TeamVampire chapter 8 . 6/26/2009
Wow. That was weird. What a twist.
Hm. I'm a little bit torn at the moment. You see, I love this fic. It's unique, well written, interesting, but I'm really just over Twilight. And I'd feel so bad if I stopped reading this, but, despite having a completely different plot to Twilight, it just doesn't keep my attention anymore. So, even though it kills me to do it, I think I'm going to remove it from my alerts. Don't take it the wrong way. And who knows? If I ever get back into Twilight I might find this story again. You're a fantastic writer, much better than most, so I genuinely hope I do come back to this fic. But I won't be able to review properly until I actually am interested in it again.
Awesome story so far.
| Melolabel chapter 8 . 6/25/2009
What the? Mike is a vampire now? What next a ninja? Poor mike, maybe now the fanficdom can have a little sympathy for the guy...
| muffielady chapter 7 . 6/19/2009
so good and surprising plot twists! am looking forward to more mike newton! -sb
| TeamVampire chapter 7 . 5/27/2009
*nods* Melolabel is a good author.
And that was some fine action, though Bella's POV was undoubtedly less clear than someone who had been involved in the fight. I totally didn't see the vampire/werewolf thing coming. Insane.
| Melolabel chapter 7 . 5/27/2009
Maybe Mikes mother should've been named Xena, warrior princess. Just kidding, excellent action, the werewolf transformation from the inside perspective was cool. Well done!
| Christian Sage chapter 7 . 5/27/2009
Amazing! This story is so original! I love this!
I am greedy, give me more!
Are the pirates going to change any of them? Edward?
| Christian Sage chapter 6 . 5/14/2009
This story is so cool! I love the women pirate thing, I wish that was me. Sigh. Anyway, this story is so well thought out and written, I love it! Please keep it up!