|Reviews for Tender Sugar|
| RoobieBooh chapter 1 . 8/11
Twisted and freaky. Perfect! Loved the idea of kakashi with the joker smile. Never saw that one coming. Though i must say i am confused as to who the mother of sasuke's kid is. But i get the feeling you left that open for usreaders to use our imaginations.
| Gal Can't Help It chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
That right there? That was some creepy, heebie-jeebie-type action taking place. Despite being sufficiently spooked, I liked it, especially the ending.
| Skyrere chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
| Ran'sLover chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
That was freaking terrifying! I read it at work and I still have chills. Awesome Story!
| SkyyeStrike chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
You seriously scared me on the third and fourth rounds of the dream. Gave me chills. Wow.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
That was awsome! I was thinking Sasuke's son was born when he was fifteen?
Then if the calculation is correct, the mom cant be Kirin? Huh.
Either way it was excellent: detail was superb, and the best you saved for last.
| Emo Akatsuki Addict chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
0_o It figures that Sasuke and Karin's son would be totally psycho...
| Hitomi Star chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Yeah that was flippin' creepy! If it was a happy ending that would have been nice.
| always-kh chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
i'm sooooo damn confused. what was that?
| Porkchop's Little Ditty chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I have no idea WHY I have not read this story before, but I just want to let you know that if I don't sleep tonight or any other night (for an undisclosed length of time)it's going to be your fault; no matter what! lol
This piece is really well written and the detail is astounding. In reflection of all your previous work, you pay much attention to detail, but focus more on the progression of the story— which keeps the readers interest to continue on. I feel that in this story you managed to find the balance between both continuity and detail. While I'm not surprised by your endless quantity of talent; a few times I couldn't help but marvel over how I felt like I was experiencing the fear Sakura was feeling.
Great job keeping the story in line and packing every sentence with great description.
| Vitiate chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
This story was amazingly brilliant, though it did take me awhile to evaluate your story. Though the end did clear up what was happening. I'm guessing that the boy is the son of Sasuke and that woman was his semi-lover; seeing that it was implied that Sasuke loved someone else, which I'm assuming is Sakura, which is why all the crap is only happening to her. Anyways once again fantastic job I loved!
| yanny88 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
That was pretty scary...it felt so real actually. Sakura going mental was wonderful, though it had me freaking out half the time :P. But the end had me slightly confused though...scared, but confused. Overall, I loved it XD
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
| pisquenta chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
OH MY GOD! It's 1 am and I definitely cannot go to sleep after that!
| bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Okay, I'm not sleeping tonight. Happy?
Actually, I've got some maths homework that desperately requires completion. So thanks anyway. Tres creepy.