|Reviews for Their Child|
| Shian1998 chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
Quite enjoyed this one! Loved how Harry was so determined here to make sure his children would not experience the horrors of his own childhood. Also liked how here he gave them names that had nothing to do with their fallen loved ones, as while naming a kid after one of the fallen is a nice way to honour that fallen person, it also unfairly puts pressure on the kid to live up to their namesake. Also liked the way you altered the Jack and Jill poem at the end.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
I like Harry’s pondering. This is good.
| rnthenu chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
I read all of your Harry Potter stories, and liked them. Thank you very much for writing. Hope you are doing well outside fanfics.
| SAK00 chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
This is a lovely one-shot! I think Harry's concern for his children was portrayed very well.
| HermioneWeasley93 chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
This is a really sweet story. I get the feeling Harry would make a good dad.
| 17 Hope chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This was really well written, you have a really good writing style
| ASP12 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
It was awesome! REally cute!
| neonorne chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Hi, this is me, neonorne, reviewing you back for your nice reiview of my 'Out of Azkaban' story:
Very realistic thoughts from a father-to-be I think. Also much appreciated the idea of giving them ordinary names instead of the James Sirius and Albus Severus horror of the epilogue - both ugly and asking the child to carry the burden of the dead...
But perhaps this piece is a bit - still? In a way his thoughts were too obvious, with no tension or surprise. I don't mean everything must be full of conflict, not at all, but in a way this was too smooth to be really interesting, at least to me.
But you write well, and in an honest kind of way, so I'm going to go and sample some more of your HP stories (that's all the fanfic I read, I'm afraid)
| Clever xXx Pseudonym chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
aww :') adorable
| artyfan chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Pretty good. I think that Jack and Jill are a bit out of pace with all the rest of the names in their massive family, but this is fanfiction. And Hugo is as well.
| daphne 13 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
loved it. makes sense. :D
| The Pianist's Touch chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Funny how you write this nd then Harry DID name one of his children James, the other Lily, and the third Albus. You wrote this before the seventh book came out, in '08, which is why it is highly ironic
| quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Very emotional and realistic. Good job.
| Xadro chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
how disgustingly sappy.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Really insightful! that MOB ruined Harry's life! ARRGGHH! It didn't have to be that way. Bumbles was such a stupid man.