|Reviews for Caught Up In Between|
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
To be honest, the summary makes Jiraiya sound bad! That's why, at first, i'm afraid to read it... #peace
But, after finally read all this... OhMG! I falling in Love!
This is so bitter-sweet! Heart-breaking then Heart-warming!
Oh God... Love It!
| 9Demon9Girl9 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
TT-TT Great job.
| Kyuobou Zetsumei chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I love it, it's awe inspiring -
| Blacktyrant43 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
So sad I really loved the fic as well as the emothins you convied through it I could honestly beleve that this happened in the ending was so cute well not really cute but endearing keep up the good work :)
| Alice Uzumaki chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I am a huge Naruto fan, was heartbroeken to find out Jiraiya dies. I cried reading the fathers day one and this one. I have to say you're a talented writer. I encourage you to write more for me. Please. Keep writing, really, truly do. Thank you for writing these stories!
| The Epitome of Insanity chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
How cute! Naruto just a broken child that need his sensei to care for him.
| MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
But he does leave him! It may not have been by choice, but still! *sniffle* The part where he learns that Jiraiya was gone was horrible! I cried SO MUCH! Then afterwords with where he's sitting alone on the bench and has two popcicles... I LOVE YOUR FLUFF!
| 13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Another brilliant fan fiction! I love how Naruto appears vulnerable and unstable here, a stark contrast to his usual gutsy self. The Kyuubi was captured brilliantly!
I enjoy Jiraiya's parental side coming out here, and when he is trying to get Naruto to drop the kunai.
I mainly love how clingy Naruto seems to Jiraiya, especially how he grasps the Toad Sage's vest and neck. The fragility of Naruto is incredibly exciting because he is always jumping head first into the fight! It's nice to see this part of Naruto as it is like Jiraiya must gently care for him else he will break!
Well written, very touching and once again the characters are captured brilliantly. Take care and farewell!
- Akira Kuran
| Flighty Wren chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
You're very good at writing Jiraiya/Naruto family fics. I'll say it once again, you're a great writer. I really love this fic.
| SOulWindWALKER chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Thank you for the story it was a really great read! _
| hoigui chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Perfict absolutley perfect. :)
| Starlight45417 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Awwww so sweet
Cookie for you! _
| Heir of Rage chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
whoa...that was so sweet, and perfectly angsty, hehe! awesomely written...is it wrong that im wanting this to be a multi-chapter? nyehhh...
| Ulura chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
You have to write more stories like this! its hard to find stories about jiraiya and naruto that dint involve them kissing or falling in love or something else crappy. This was great!
| Mistress of the Words chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
This was so touching. I wasn't really sure what to think when Jiraiya kept leaving Naruto, I kept wondering why he refused to watch him. I really felt sad for Naruto :( Kyuubi gets on my nerves sometimes...no, make that ALL the time!
Anyway, great little story, it was very well done and so sweet :)