|Reviews for A Ghost Story|
| euforie chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
wow... just wow...
secretly hoping for a second chapter...
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Sakura is scaring me... Kakashi, run before you die, this is your only chance! Anywho, great story, little creepy, but hey, still cool.
| Seductive Lama chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Wo-ha-hooo. Now, this has just gotta be the most erotic thing I have ever read. Like ever. Now if you'll excuse me, Im gonna go take a cold shower. Speaking of which, did you write this thing in an ice bath or something...?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
... it might be a good idea to categorize this as "horror". The whole taking control of Sakura's body and raping Kakashi is a bit too much to be merely "suspense". Warning about non-con would have been nice too to be honest.
| Sakura.-Mudou chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
My gosh...i can't belive it!
I relly love this story,such a wonderfull thing!
Is this the only chapter? ...this was awesome
| Arioneway chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
OMG! SO SCARY
| Mikachuuu chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Oh my god...
I fucking loved it...
Holy fucking shit...
The story you wrote was utterly amazing! Clever! Oh wow! Wow! Just wow!
| Tsume Yuki chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Congratulations, you successfully scared the crap out of me.
I was here more for the story line, but the lemon was erm, as well written as the rest of it? I don't know, I'm not an avid fan of them really, but I guess this was creepy hot.
I fear for Kakashi's future really.
Good story, thanks for sharing
| Hatake-kun chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
If the ghost took over Sakura, then this story is hella freaky ...
| Tsuki479 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Haha poor Kakashi. This is hillarious and ohw-som-HOT. Great story.
| another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Man... I don't know whether to deem that extremely frightening or not. x_x My god, Sakura's possessed... that's so friggin' scary.
O_O Poor Kakashi...
| Mizuki Inuzuka chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Damn, this was sexy!
| JavaQuilava chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I thoroughly enjoyed. A very yummy if not slightly scary lemon !
The way you portrayed Kakashi as someone who wasn't as great in bed was also quite a shocker :)
| LovexxxSakuraUchiha chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
| redchicken888 chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Wow..I have a LOT of comments on this story. Whew! This is gonna be a pretty loooong review, so get ready. ;3
First of all...I was wondering what exactly happened on that particularingly embarrassing mission that Kakashi wanted to keep under wraps. You know, the thingy about the cucumber and jar of sesame oil? It must be mortifying if Kakashi is worried about it getting out. Hmmm...I wonder what it could be? Please PM me and let me know!
Also, I noticed a similarity in this story and your other one, "Aqueous Seduction", I think it's called. Both are UBER creepy, and both end kind of...unhappily. Also, both have some kind of a mysterious entity involved. Do you have a liking for legends and/or ghost stories? Huh. Maybe I should find a suitable legend/myth and turn it into a story. Might be kinda fun. hehe XD
Also, I think it was kind of funny that Kakashi had a...little problem in this fanfic. He always seems like the alpha male, the top dog, with no problems. It was a little amusing to see him totally helpless in this story. Way to go! :D
One last thing. Have you ever seen a show called "Ghost Adventures"? It would totally prove the whole ghost thing in this story. Not to mention that the team leader in the show, Zak, is totally hawt. :3
So anyways, nice story, and happy writing! ;)