|Reviews for Allure|
| willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
kind of sad
| PWTMC chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Wow, this was really good.
Totally original idea and an awesome read! :D
| LadyEOcelot chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
THAT is what that bitch gets! Trying to eat poor Kashi baby's soul! *She huffs* Her tree should eat her or something for doing such things to him. ...God, Kashi's smexy, he needs his soul so he can keep being smexy for us *nods nods to this*
| keemirain chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I was hoping they'd get it on LOL
But it is much more dramatic to end it this time, I guess (:
Thanks for writing!
Twas an awesome read!
| Kakashifan727 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Weird but I liked it.
| sakurablossom777 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Wow Sakura was an awesome witch! I really liked the story!
| U NEED HELP chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Not bad Eldr, pretty funny, at least. I did notice many problems, though, as far as confusion in your sentences went... Were you still drunk when you posted this? D: I guess it's pretty late for you right now though... still, I would DEFINITELY suggest another read through because at some parts I felt very confuzzled by fragments or missing words.
-U Need help...LIKE NOW!
Confuzzled is not a word either, d.u.m.b. .$.$
| bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
I think I need to read more Supernatural fics...this one is pretty interesting. I sort of like how short it is and how vague you keep Sakura's nature. Kind of weird/strange. But cool.
| BlackStoneCherry chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I liked it, I was confused at first of what to make of it because it's so different. It was definitely creative and unique and a good submition.
| Miss Loquacious chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
O, very nice. I love the idea and the execution was great. I like how it was such an anticlimatic ending, emphasizing the sense of unfullfillment. Kudos.
| Tintinnabula chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
You have a gift for storytelling, Eldr Fire. This story has a rhythm that built slowly into a powerful climax, and your choice of words was superb. I have to say, however, that I was almost wishing that Sakura did consume his soul or do whatever it was that she intended. Considering how much I love Kakashi, that says a lot about your story!
| iFo0l chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
whoa..fucked up !
hahha this is certainly something i didn't expect to read !
wow, great response to the challenge !
i was going to vote for leafy cause it was so funny,
but this has definitely got me thinking differently,
great work !
| inu-babygirl chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
aw poor kura-chan heheheheh she lost kashi becuz she was careles ehehheheheheh this was great u go girl hehhehehe INU
| ronny-of-yore chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
GaH! My mind is not equipped to even begin to figure out what in the world Sakura was. She wasn't human, that much is certain. I was thinking vampire at first, but no. A burning in her throat... She can change into a bird and also minipulate the edges of thoughts? ...I have no idea. ;_;
Your Kakashi had me rolling my eyes too when he associated her image the first time with sex. LOL But I had a big ass smile on my face when I did. :P
I was so glad when he got away from her, but also sad too when she wasted away. I really liked your flow and you definately have a way with words yourself there woman! Great Job! You totally broke the mold here. :)