Reviews for Letting Free
ReluctantRomantic chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
This is wonderful! Such good character development even within a short story.
truehazel chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I've never read LGLI. That being said, I thnk this was beautiful.

Bittersweet. Isn't it such a human trait to complicate things that ought be more simple?

Even though I knew not what had happened to Bella, I wasn't very confused. You gave enough information to understand the story, but not too much that a oneshot turned into a short story.

I will definately have to check out LGLI.

I would recomend doing this in EPOV but seeing as how it

]s connected to anther story I've yet to read, I don't feel I have the right. If you think it would work I would appreciate EPOV.

Jess
a great fan chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
yes! kep going! i loved it!
Chibi Bee-Chan chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Aww. Poor Bella

Wonderful Story, I like it :)
Blossom Angel92 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I loved the first story, "Letting Go, Letting In" and I loved this one to. And I like the idea of you doing another story like a bridge between this one and the other, but could you do another after "LGLI" please. I think the final is very descretive of what is going to happen, but coul you do the story, please. So you stay with 4 stories all toghether. please! And by the way i love your writting.
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
this is perfect as it is.

we can fill in the blanks for ourselves.

however if you want to do an epov of this...
Brittani chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Please do a part 2! I really want to see how it all turns out...Why did Edward leave? Did it really mean so little to him? Or was he secretly in love with her and too scared to see her reaction to their drucken love making? Please continue this! I'm curious to see how it ends.
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
A second part to this would be awesome xD It might help ease some of my confusion as to why Edward left. This story was pretty good :) Bella's desperation in the beginning was a nice touch. To be honest this would be a very good start to a longer story. A story on how Edward and Bella found out that they liked eachother as more than just friends. Have some complications and unwillingness and it would make a wonderful story xD I can already imagine xD Keep Writing!

TwilightBorn
xteamxswissx chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
that was really good! u should definately do a second chapter! or more!
luv-me-sum-edward chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
great writing ur awesome... i think u should keep writing this it is good...
lexie chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
i loved it
make a second part please
swtbabie chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
That was awesome.
TheClockisTicking chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
How could Edward just leave! More! Please! I have to know what happens!
Jackiswhack chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
i absolutely love this story...

i don't know what you should do with it.. but keep writing.
ashleigh chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
i think you should totally follow up with it...

i mean the whole bridge thing or whatever
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