Reviews for Necessary Action
Ryn chapter 9 . 9/5/2016
Well done! The plotting was impeccable, the pacing tight. The terror, the anxiety, the determination of Amita, thoroughly believable. And Don, we all know how he would do his utmost and beyond for family and friends. Great job!
2028 chapter 9 . 5/27/2016
Thanks for writing about Amita. I like it when women are the heroes. I have a hard time writing about the geniuses in the series, but you did a great job.
Gianna di Fiori chapter 9 . 5/27/2016
A perfectly wonderful portrayal of Amita! This story was intense and moving, and, completely different from most stories featuring Amita. I feel you had all the characters completely on parr with how I have always envisioned them to be.
ym4yum1 chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
I read this just as you told me, but only made the account today, so... here I am!

You know I don't like to see him in danger or hurt, but this is a great story! And ended well, so, I'm ok!

i"Charlie and Don glanced at each other. Charlie was reminded again how close he had come to losing her, to losing both of them; two of the most important people in his life. His eyes found Don's. Thank you – for helping her, for being strong, for being you."/i

Perfect line, perfect moment, our lovely brothers Eppes!
nessy22 chapter 9 . 5/16/2011

I newly discovered this story. And I love it very much. So special, because of the fact, there aren't many or any stories about Amita and Don in this way ( probably I missed them!)

And the relationship between them, how you described it, is so wonderful.( it could take place in the real TV-show, witch I appreciate)

Then the story for itself is very well written (as all your stories, by the way. I love them all), so thrilling and intense. Just the situation, that Don had to give it up to Amita to defense them. How he teached her to ACT! The bound grown between them. Only to think about: Amita having Don's head in her lap caressing him, while he was so weak and bleeding nearly to death, afraid to confront the cruel site of life.

I had to read this story strait the way through. It is just amasing! I hope you will read this review, although its a bit late. And I want to thank you for keeping Numb3rs alive.
Cissyaliza chapter 9 . 4/6/2011
I've printed this fic to read it quietly and I love it. I've read many fics with Don in danger, some with Charlie or Alan take care of him. It's the first where Amita takes care of Don and I love this concept.
MyLifeIsComplete chapter 9 . 11/5/2010
I must say, this is a very good book. When I first looked at it I'm like 'Amita and Don... this is going to get interesting.' There are a lot of people who potray Amita in various different ways and not all of them good. I liked that you potrayed her with strength and courage - it made me feel strenghtened too.

Thank you. Excellent work.

Kitchen Klutz
Whispering Darkness chapter 9 . 5/31/2010
This was great! I loved seeing a different side to Amita and I really liked the Primacy episode to see Amita interact with the team and Don without Charlie. This story just took that a step further. Really enjoyed reading it!
onlywaytobegone chapter 9 . 2/24/2010
Okay, so I owe you lots of reviews after all your lovely ones for my fics. :) I actually read this story more than once, that's how much I enjoyed it. The interactions were great, and I loved the exploration of Don/Amita vs. Charlie/Amita.
Wenwalke chapter 9 . 5/26/2009
Great story, just found it and read it straight through, loved it. Good work.
Jelsemium chapter 9 . 2/15/2009
Excellent story! I really think you did a good job with the drama and keeping everyone in character.

So nice to see a story where Amita places such a pivotal role.
roni 711 chapter 9 . 11/17/2008
Hi there!

Just found your awesome story today! You definitely deserve a standing ovation for this masterpiece! It’s absolutely faultless! Although if you plan on writing a sequel, I'd love it if Don and Amita fall for one another after such an overwhelming ordeal!

Lv ya!

Tea chapter 9 . 11/17/2008
Wow, this was really good. I normally don't like Amita, I mean really don't like her, but the way you wrote her was really good. So good in fact that for the first time I sort of liked her. I liked how you had her reacting, first the hysterics-understandable, but then reality and her understanding the situation and UNDERSTANDING just what was going to happen, and what she was going to have to do. I guess I like how you portray her as having an inner strength, without being wishy-washy on the outside. Good job.
alwaysateen chapter 9 . 11/16/2008
Excellent story!

I love how Don helped Amita concentrated during this horrible ordeal. Very cool to see these two characters interact with each other, a rare thing. :)
McHammy chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Excellent story.
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