|Reviews for Ghosts That Fade|
| HarmoniaFreak chapter 28 . 7/11/2016
I literally cried for a full 10 minutes while i am waiting for the review page to load up. This is one of the best that i have read for HMDS series and literally one of those fanfics that moved me. The emotions was relayed out in more ways than one, leaving me breathless and confused as each chapter ends. This fic made me question about our society. I have a criminal as a Father myself, and yes even though he did a crime, it was something far away from his love to me as a wonderful Father. The world is really blind, right? People keeps wanting Justice but doesn't really know where Justice needs to stand. And for that reason i took up Legal Management. Yes there were some mishaps over the court scenes, but i find the court scene part to be the most heart twisting part of them all. I love you for being a hardworking gal who did a thorough research about this. I expect that you'll pursue to be a writer someday, because you are qualified for it.
AND SKYE. OH SKYE. OH MY EVER SMOOTH AND CUNNING SKYE. I seriously cried for him because of this fic. I suddenly became curious about his backstory in the game and i cannot help but frown at how life can be really hard at him. AND TO THINK I AM CHOOSING OVER THE DOCTOR AND HIM AS MY HUSBAND IN THE GAME RIGHT NOW, I AM SO GONNA CHOOSE SKYE RIGHT AFTER I POSTED THIS REVIEW AND CRY AT HIM LIKE "SKYEEEEEE IM SORRY I SHOULD HAVE KNOOOOWN"
Keep up the good work! I love this so much! It's on my re-read list now and please consider to be a writer someday okay? The way you handle their Character Developments and your never ending passion for your story until you had it done was very rare to have. GJ!
| pen-for-sword chapter 28 . 10/8/2015
Oh my gosh I love, love, love this so much! I really love how you wrote Skye here. Skye is one of my favorite Harvest Moon characters, and the romance here was absolutely beautiful. I just finished reading a fic in which Skye is a major jerk-face, so this is a really satisfying read. I was a little bit sad that Willow turned out to be Trent's after all, but cest la vie, I guess.
As a highschool student interested in law, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the court scenes.
Also, was that an Island of Happiness reference I saw there? :D It really looked like it.
If it was, I would have really liked to see a bit more Vaughn stuff, but eh.
Good job! I loved it.
| k chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
| Ekoaleko chapter 28 . 10/18/2014
Dude. This is probably the last notification you'd expect in your e-mail, but I just re-read this story because I was sitting in my bed on a lazy Saturday, with my eyes rolling into the back of my skull whenever I tried studying for my upcoming human cognition midterm. And it just randomly came to me, that, hey, I haven't read anything GOOD in awhile. Where can I read something good? And of course, I found myself here.
This story is a beautiful masterpiece, and I can tell you undertook a mountainous amount of research to create the intricate, accurate, masterful diamond that this 28-chaptered piece is. I missed this - reading stuff written by a passionate author with fine attention to detail and a bizarre roller coaster of a storyline.
I hope I see your name on a shelf at a bookstore one day. And I hope you're doing well. I haven't written in awhile, but I hope you're still grinding out pieces as awe-strikingly wonderful as this.
| Teacup chapter 28 . 12/19/2013
You have no idea how beautiful I think your story is. It is the only one to leave me in tears. I loved every bit of this. It actually took me like 2 weeks to finish since I read 2 chapters a night. But I knew you wouldn't pick sides with either of them and somehow make a good agreement between the both of them! And I most absolutely love the letters at the end, it made my heart cry in joy. Like, really. This is the best thing I've read and I could not ask for more. Thank you for sharing!
PS: This is my first review, and this one's for you!
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 14 . 1/5/2013
Aw poor Nami.
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 12 . 1/5/2013
WHAT WHAT DOES IT SAY?
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 10 . 1/5/2013
I will fucking kill Skye.
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 9 . 1/5/2013
I really love this, it's amazing I hope you publish a book some day.
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
Wait Nami is the detective? PLOT TWIST!
This is really good!
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
| AbandonedAccount123 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
This is really good.
| andIJDC chapter 28 . 10/20/2012
Wow, this was one heck of a thrill ride but I honestly loved every little bit of it. All that pure, raw emotion from the first chapter is what captured me at first but it didn't stop there - I mean it was EVERYWHERE after that and I just absorbed all of it. It really was truly great. Besides that the plot - all the twists and turns, even when I thought I had figured it out, or I thought I was finally recovering from one sudden and unexpected turn in the ride - bam, there's a 50ft drop that has my eyes spinning. And, I think what I loved most was that it wasn't just focused on one person. All the characters' stories were so well interwoven with each other. Even minor characters all had their little spot where they seemed to fit in so snugly. Really, I loved this story.
"PSS: Unless you are a tea person." Oh, Jack haha... XD