SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Minerva77 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Always continue in writing... Growing is a never ending process for us all... So keep it up :))

Much Love,


Boonah chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Hey just had too read this as soon as I could :)

Really sweet story but now I am left wanting more, really good ideas sweets. Well done for puting yourself out there. Hopefully you'll keep on writing xxxx
WitchyVampireGirl chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Aww soo cute.. I like..
southernwandlover84 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Mia, this was so funny. I think I was laughing the whole time I read the chapter. Any more?
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Ok did we or didn't we?
sandym chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I love it ! U are an awsome writer!
Butterfly Betty chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
It's a great start, Mia.
nails233 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
you so need to share this more! i love it!
TeamAllTwilight chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Mia~ I normally do not read any vamp stories. I like the way you are sharing your thoughts of how things were...I love Emmett the loud mouth jokester! Kudos!

NewTownGirl chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
I hope you continue this, it's a really cute little piece and I am interested to see where you take it xoxo
NewTownGirl chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Couldn't sleep so thought I would check your stuff out. I really like the idea for this, it's very cute and I think you captured the characters really well. There was only one minor problem with the punctuation, it's even a mistake I used to make. If you are doing speech you always have the punctuation inside the speech marks, for example

the whole time," said Bella


the whole time." Said Bella

instead of

the whole time.", said Bella

Other than that it was great though, it was really engaging, which is the important thing about writing anyways :)xoxo
BellaTheWanted chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
It's ok! Don't let that Crash Hale author get you down! Mebbe she's just jealous, cos u write better than her;) Keep rolling out these awesome chapters, yea?
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
An interesting scenario, Bella's "morning after" with all the Cullens-and I think you got the conversation pretty spot-on, because there's no way Emmett would let that moment go by without plenty of teasing! :) Just watch your spelling and punctuation, or get someone to help you with that. Thanks for writing!
Twilightaddict chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This shit sucks!
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