Reviews for Transferring into Hell
Guest chapter 9 . 1/20/2013
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munford chapter 13 . 9/4/2012
More very good job
Laurel.Evermore chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
It's too short! Still improvement on the spellings.
Laurel.Evermore chapter 4 . 9/3/2012
To improve, try not to abbreviate words like 'u' you. I dunno, it seems better that way. But it was funny- I like your humour.
Laurel.Evermore chapter 3 . 9/3/2012
There was some spelling mistakes, but over all, it was great. Also double check your tenses. Most of it was fluent until towards the end.
Laurel.Evermore chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Nice one. No improvements needed. It's funny as it is.
Laurel.Evermore chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
That was great! I loved it, especially the comedy parts with Tsuruga Ren. You've got me hooked. Just one teeny problem, you spelled 'holt' wrong. It's 'halt'.
chibi panda love chapter 13 . 9/1/2012
he plans on showing the pic to the princable doesn't he.. what happens next?
chibi panda love chapter 12 . 8/8/2012
awww booo what happens next!?
chibi panda love chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
"Okay. Nurse, pull the plug." The principal said sadly. Ren stopped and turned around.

"Stop! Wait! Why are you killing him?" Ren said, hurriedly.

"Because Mr. Hyuuda said that if you refused, he would have no reason to be alive because he's too old to get another job, and teaching is his life. So he told me to pull the plug."

"Okay! I will do it! Just don't kill him, and take me home."

"You start in two weeks! Tsuruga-sensei." The principal said, smiling. Ren wanted to rip the smile off the principal's face. They walked to the principal's car

thats just wrong haaha! XD
phxjkr88 chapter 12 . 8/1/2012
Not sure what to say, good chapter and I can't wait to see what Ren does. Also,I glad you FINALLY update the story.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/29/2012
He he he, like your style of writing bro. hOnK hOnK :o)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
Hmm, I like this chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
Okay, what the hell?
Guest chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
Woah... Okay, I wanna see Ren blow a gasket bro.
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