Reviews for Unified Theory
bluebird397 chapter 2 . 4/19
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 16 . 4/7
Ahaha! Ahh, this was really neat.
Caution: this review contains some spoilers, though I do TRY to be a bit vague.

A bit of a head rush, reading it all in one go like I did... :P But I quite like the parallels with Iron Man 1 & 2. Really neat how this played out, too, on the theme of "magic revealed to the muggles" and all. And ha, cool! I thought Harry was still somehow in the suit, but I didn't know how he managed to be in two places at once. Ahh, cool, he's like the london/magical version of stark... :3 it's a pity he didn't interact more with stark, speaking of; it woulda been hilarious probably. But, well... they are rival companies. xD
And it was funny how Harry had a loophole for teddy and the others "owning" the company - i thought to myself, "whoops, he really should have made that "only once I'm dead"." ...AND HE DID. xD haha! called it... :P

Soo, yep, great story! fun read.
Thanks for your work!
Neo-Devil chapter 16 . 4/6
so harry just BARELY managed to save himself from that curse that was slowly eating at him, talk about a close call...
Fick Chick chapter 8 . 1/31
Maybe it's Sirius controlling the suit.
Fick Chick chapter 7 . 1/31
My 1st guess for James's ID was Harry using a time turner, but I can't figure out how he became 7 ft tall other than "magic".
jeanette9a chapter 16 . 1/3
you don't need to delete it, i like it as it is.
and you might think it's bad, but in all honesty it just shows your growth as an author. sometimes people like the original over the rewrite, nostalgia is not one thing you should overlook, but it should also not cloud your senses.
sometimes people read it more than once just because they like it, it doesn't need to be perfect because nobody and nothing truly is. also perfection what is it truly? what is it, it's based on what normality there is, so why would you want to have a normal story? won't you rather have a story that's unique with a couple flaws here and there? to make it stand out? to make people want to look what it is about? it does now and is in fact on a list of the" Harry potter stories that rock", embrace what you have created and use it as a template to improve yourself, instead of letting it drag you down.
Noble Korhedron chapter 16 . 12/13/2014
Good story. Pity you retired, I'd have loved to have seen a sequel...
Yami-Guy chapter 4 . 10/17/2014
This chapter right here reminded me why I hate Hermione as a character. Dear lord. Great chapter so far otherwise.
railmaniac chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
Don't be ridiculous, there's no such thing as "too" scientific.
paskinmath chapter 16 . 3/6/2014
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 16 . 2/19/2014
so much fun! loved this!
Preier chapter 16 . 1/8/2014
disappointing. some interesting ideas but on the whole too many rehash of the plot points of IM.

overly competent antagonist, overly perfect antagonist plot, inexistent outside world (police forces? counterterrorism? bait or hostages, if that)...

and let's not forget a hero who barely goes above a stunner against murderers (until the AK-ex-machina)

ah well, it was five years ago, right...
Preier chapter 12 . 1/8/2014
yeah, because if you want to hit a flying target, tanks are the weapon of choice...
sdoyle1989 chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
this story is great thanks for writing it!
TheJadePhoenix chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
That last line... Just makes me think "father, son, holy ghost" lol
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