|Reviews for The war|
| Bloody Hearts chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
please update soon xxx
| Dream I Dare chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
What century is it in?
Can't wait for an update
| zeina1 chapter 3 . 3/12/2011
i love it u should update it
| PixieGirl94 chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
I liked your story and hope that you will update it soon
| Hatty101 chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
I love your story please write more! Hatty101 x
| weflytothetardis chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
| CluelessAngel chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
interesting update soon!
| The Weatherwitch chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
haahhaahha ok this sounds pretty good, please continue!
| musicrazy94 chapter 3 . 4/25/2009
Well i think its good it has a cool twist please write soon to finish it.
| Inspiration Found chapter 3 . 3/7/2009
is there going to be any more it is really good!
| whitezcar chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
I love it! PLEASE UPDATE!
| Elven at Heart chapter 3 . 12/15/2008
This was a wonderful chapter! Hope to see another update soon!
Elven at Heart
| BellissaAdreana chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I like it!
Next chapter son please!
It took FOREVER for you to get this chapter up!
| IceBubbles chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I think its sort of good. I like your idea, the plot. But I think you should have put in more detail on chapter three. First I don't know and don't care what the first paragraph of chapter three is about. Next why does he want to protect her? I know because I read twilight, but you're doing the whole AU thing you could spend a few sentences explaining it. I think it would make it better. Or maybe you were planning to do back explaining in chapter four?
I definitely think you should continue. I wanna see how it turns out. Try for more detail though. It feels like your writing an outline not a story. There's all this empty space you could fill. You're good writer. I want MORE. XD
| vampireadtic chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
that interesting.i'm really curious to see what happens. update soon! im guessing that girl was alice:)