Reviews for The war
Bloody Hearts chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
please update soon xxx
Dream I Dare chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
What century is it in?
Can't wait for an update
zeina1 chapter 3 . 3/12/2011
i love it u should update it
PixieGirl94 chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
I liked your story and hope that you will update it soon
Hatty101 chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
I love your story please write more! Hatty101 x
weflytothetardis chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
CluelessAngel chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
interesting update soon!
The Weatherwitch chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
haahhaahha ok this sounds pretty good, please continue!
musicrazy94 chapter 3 . 4/25/2009
Well i think its good it has a cool twist please write soon to finish it.
Inspiration Found chapter 3 . 3/7/2009
is there going to be any more it is really good!
whitezcar chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
Elven at Heart chapter 3 . 12/15/2008
This was a wonderful chapter! Hope to see another update soon!

Elven at Heart
BellissaAdreana chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I like it!

Next chapter son please!

It took FOREVER for you to get this chapter up!
IceBubbles chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I think its sort of good. I like your idea, the plot. But I think you should have put in more detail on chapter three. First I don't know and don't care what the first paragraph of chapter three is about. Next why does he want to protect her? I know because I read twilight, but you're doing the whole AU thing you could spend a few sentences explaining it. I think it would make it better. Or maybe you were planning to do back explaining in chapter four?

I definitely think you should continue. I wanna see how it turns out. Try for more detail though. It feels like your writing an outline not a story. There's all this empty space you could fill. You're good writer. I want MORE. XD
vampireadtic chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
that interesting.i'm really curious to see what happens. update soon! im guessing that girl was alice:)
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