Reviews for My Shattered Heart
Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
The way you described Orochimaru's emotions towards his sensei and teammates and his general point of view proves just how well written this is! :)
inhonorof chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Hi, RedPan sama. You know me as krtckl/isaw from mangashare. Hand Banana san asked us to leave feedback for your story so I did so. This story was good, really. I love how you described stuff-I could NEVER do that. Anyways, just know I miss you, and I feel like this now- I was making a silent prayer, that I would be strong, and beyond the need of others. Beyond the reaches of even death. And somehow, the living blood of my parents will enjoy that eternity.

RIP, RedPan sama. You'll be sorely missed.
Bre Henson chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
This is a very, very, beautiful, and touching story. :)

The descriptions of everything are so very detailed.
AngeloftheOdd chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Oh I loved this! The scene in the manga of Orochimaru and Sarutobi standing over the graves of Orochi's parents...and the white snake skin...it just touched me very deeply. You captured that moment so beautifully in your story. Great job! Cheers,

AngeloftheOdd
30sec2kiba chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
that was really good! :D i was tearing up