|Reviews for Sasori All Alone|
| PunctuationFairy chapter 1 . 7/4
Third time, once more into the fray!
I praise the beta reader you must have begged to try and clean up this pile of strange and flexible... something. Once again, I must beg you to consider the Oxford Comma, and please stop avoiding it as if it's a venomous snake. And spell check is your friend as well. Even when you wrote this there were websites online that would spell check for you. They are not that difficult to find. Plus, isn't Sasori made from wood at this point? How would he have an erection, let alone a sex drive? And a ring isn't something that you can 'unclick,' they are made from rubber that rolls down over the member, or leather that can be fitted over the base and around the balls.
Please do your research.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
I never knew that Sasori was a machochist. XD Love the fanfic, by the way!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
damn the end was funnnyyy
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
:3 ,so many toys,LOLZZZZ,
"D-Deidara please...I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeed to releaseeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeee.
isn't tat kinda...too long?i didn't expect could 'Saso-chan' scream tat LONG
LOLZZZ,i was so used to Dei-chan,now Saso-chan,LOLZZZ
| MY SIDES chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I'm laughing so hard I can't breathe.
Hooray for female virgins writing gay porn!
| tyler chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
| tyler chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Your grammar is horrible. The smut is average which doesn't make up for almost every line having some horribly obvious mistake. It's not even just grammar. In one line you call Sasori a virgin and almost immediately after that you say they've had sex before. You should really consider getting a beta reader. If you already have one then you are pretty clearly in need of a new/better one.
| yumyumYAOI chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Hahahahaha that was so fucking awesome what Konan did. I would have been doing the same thing!
| Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Ha ha I really loved this even though the spelling was bad but It was too damn funny especially with the toys
| monkey-is-licking-my-face-OMG chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
THNK THE HEAVENS A FNTABULOUS DEISASO FIC! I hate tht there arnt tht many where Sasori is uke. lol. Awesome work!
| Kimiko Asahara chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
| AkatsukiKitsuneX3 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
*major nosebleed*W-What r u talkin bout?This story wuz p-pure...GENIOUS!Smexi,hot,and wet!I luved it!
| Roxness chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Muhahaha! Deidara and Konan are both evil. :)
Poor Sasori, though. But oh well, it was hot XD
| Rebel-Darkness chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
i luv how konan is always the one wit de cameras, un~
epic Dei-seme ftw, un!