|Reviews for Firework|
| Lyneel chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
beautiful :) I ike the idea, as much for the plot as for the little treat at the end, for Kurogane :) Poor Fai, though... But he can get through times like that just fine, now that he is with his loving family. I'm glad for him.
Just a little remark... Fai speech, when he was in his terrified state, seemed a little strange to me. It sounded so formal and unnatural, pretty much out of place... Maybe it's just my point of view, but I don't think that scared Fai would form such complex statemnet... :?
| MageMeow chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
like it..i hope you keep writing more..good work
| anon azure chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Kurogane is there
for your comfort...
| Shunatsu chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Nice. A very, very nice story. Beeautiful, and utterly sweet!
| KuroFai-Fangirl18 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Ka! Kurogane is so sweet! I love him so much. I love Kuro-rin comforting Fai. This was a wonderful story!
| SilverKleptoFox chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
FAI ANGST IS LOVE! M that was lovely! Fai freaking out, telling about evils of his past. For a second there I thought fai wouldn;t know what fireworks were and wassad that it wouldn't be angsty, but then ka-pow! love on a stick. And the bitter chocolate at the end was a lovely touch!
See ya soon!