|Reviews for Jack's Descent|
| OfTheDark chapter 4 . 7/29/2012
I liked this until he had a multiple personality thing going on. I'd prefer if he wasn't two people, but he consciously chose to do what he did, like, he was one person filled with agony and hate, not two people conflicting inside one body
| hannahcaiusvolturi chapter 11 . 6/23/2012
Wow I know you finished this story years ago but I dont care, because this story deserves so much more reviews. I love the concept of the identity disorder and how you really made them both so different so the reader knowns who is who. I love the pairing and I also loved how it had a bittersweet end and I just really loved how this story came together. Thank you for writing such a amazing story one of the best stories I've read in a while.
| Kay chapter 6 . 8/26/2010
First I want to say I love your story it's amazing. But I read your AN about DID and I had to say something. I have it, and sometimes you are aware of what they are doing. Especially if you work on it and talk to them about not blocking you out. Also many people are fully aware of the personalities.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2010
That was a great story! Sad as he'll but GREAT
| smile-for-theswitchblade chapter 11 . 7/16/2010
You made me cry! lol. Oh my God... Wow what an amazing, brilliant, wonderful, captivating story! I was completely enthralled. Now I am in love with this pairing! LOOOVE IT! hahahaha So yes! I loved the ending! Hooray for the angst, bittersweet and the dark! xD
Am I a terribly bad person if I laughed at the death scene of Big Chin Dent?
Especially this part right here?
"Uhhh sorry, but I'm the one asking the questions here" the Joker irritably reminded him. "Speaking of which, on to question number two! What's black and white and red all over?"
"Um..." Harvey paused, taking a deep breath to calm his nerves. "...A newspaper?"
"Wrong! A bloody Batsy with facepaint!"
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| oz444 chapter 11 . 4/23/2010
FINALLY!You have no idea,I have been killing myself on this site looking for a Jackachel fic and-finally!
Anyway:Aw,loved this!Give yourself a pat on the back,this was truly marvelous!
This fic is definitely a softer,more poignant insight into the Joker's life,in contrast to the usual crazy,wild turbulence I've seen in past Joker-before-he-was-Joker fics.I really loved how deep you got into the characters,and some descriptions were particularly vivid (e. -err- "courtship" of Jack and Rachel (very sweet) and the death of Harvey Dent(WOW!)).I relly felt a roller coaster kinda rush at how different the spiritual settings changed:First,happy,with some foreshadow,then dark,darker still,gloomy,passionate,downright scary(in a good way!),suspenseful,heartrending,then bittersweet.I especially love the way you portrayed Jack/Joker's dual personaltiy!3
| ujemaima chapter 11 . 2/28/2010
Aww that was such a sad ending! I loved the story though!
| J chapter 3 . 1/1/2010
oh my gosh.. this is so sad! :O
poor Jack..and his mother and sister... Penny/Angel particularly touched me... no
| nicole napier chapter 11 . 12/18/2009
awsome awsome awsome AWSOME! this story was soo good! omg i thought that jokerXrachel fanfics would suck but this one was so awsome...u gave the grisly-gruesome-pshyco-murdering-non compassionate clown and the good-sweet-loving-and handsome jack in one package deal(that was an awsome twist i have never seen in a story and it worked perfectly)...with the also great rachel and bruce...i got to say u portrayed the joker's evil personality so well...and the story sometimes got me a little sick in my tummy...but at the same time it was so real..i never thought harvey would die like that, or even the joker/jack...and the end...wow im speechless..the end was soo sad, i almost cried, cause all he wanted in life was to spend it married to the girl he loved and with his little sis by his side...and at the end when he was calling batman..to say all that suff 'bout rachel that she just died and all just because he wanted to die to be with her was simply soo...ahh i cant find the words to describe it...really this story is deffinetly going to my favs..i LOVE it..i really wished it was longer..the part that touched me was when he was falling of the building with a peacefull smile on his face...aw i wont cry im strong...:'(...anyways im talking to muchh..u know this is the longest review i have ever given hahaha...soo cyaa...luvv this story bye
oxoxoxox nicole napier
PS: did i mention that i loveed the story..yeah? ok! hahaha byee
| Rachel A chapter 11 . 12/5/2009
(Reply to Kendra)No problem!Sorry,was just wondering
| Kendra Luehr reply to Rachel chapter 11 . 12/4/2009
Rachel, since I can't answer you (you're not logged in! :P), I figured I'd try and answer here. I honestly didn't think about that, but I suppose it'd be a boy since Jack already has so many important female figures in his life. :P Thanks for all your other lovely comments!
| Rachel A chapter 11 . 12/4/2009
Probably the one thing I positively adore is a Jokachel fic with Jackachel as well!U did a wonderful job and u deserve a cookie!And a big hug :)!I almost cried at the ending,it was so sad!But everything was so realistic,it was terrific!And she was pregnant ohh...
P.S Just out of interest...if "Jack's Descent" was longer,would u have Rachel be pregnant with a boy or a girl?
| deleted9 chapter 11 . 8/18/2009
Yeah I don't really see Rachel fully recovering and Jack overcoming the Joker to have a romantic meeting and run off happily ever after into the sunset lol...but I bet this will be even better! Wow, she's pregnant! That is soo sad! I feel soo bad for Bruce though...and Jack...both! Wow, he's good at being the Joker, that's for sure. That was the greatest ending, I loved it! It kind of made me cry a little! That was so nice though, great job!
| deleted9 chapter 10 . 8/18/2009
Ugh that has to suck so bad it makes me so sad! I mean, to know you did that..to not be with the ones you love...that's so sad! And then to be executed when you can't help it :( that's not cool, he should be locked up not killed! Yeah...he lost it a little I'm sure. Or a lot since he killed someone. Man, that sucks! I love Bruce, he's always there to rescue her! Poor Rachel, that just freaking sucks! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, but this was splendid as always!
| Hushabye chapter 11 . 8/12/2009
Such a sad, but such a good ending! I loved how you brought Penny back into this, even if it was because of death.
This rocked, nonetheless... You are one of my favorite authors on here, definitely! ]