Reviews for Left Behind
tragiang chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I'm slowly grasping your writing, a lot is going on at once, or maybe that is me. Maybe you should have made it into a series, because a oneshot like this is very long and a little confusing at times. And boy, your paragraphs are thick. I lose track of where I am sometimes, haha. Ichii and Makoto are very well, you love to make their relationship somewhat depressing and managed to throw other characters like Mizuki in the complicated storyline. xD