Reviews for Behind the Crystal
Guise'n'Disguise chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
It was actually Herrera, his mother's maiden name.
Kurogawa Yumi chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
Wait! You leave us with a cliffy and the you just stop there? Please continue, will you? I want to read more ;D

Keep up the great work,

zara2148 chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
After all this time, I suppose it's too much to hope for an update.
bluebliss86 chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
this is awesome! i can't wait for more!
JigokuYume chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
I must say I adore your story!. You portray everyone perfectly x3. Shall be awaiting a new chapter(crosses fingers)
Amber Pegasus chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
This story is very intresting, fasinating, suspense, and amazing!
Mlle Fangs chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
Please, write some more. The story sounds really interesting
boeboebi chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
i really... should've read this earlier. i really love the way you write and the pace of the story. please continue soon. 3
bgtea chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
Oh *WOW*. I'm aware that I jumped onto this bandwagon of a fic late but nonetheless, I'm so glad to have discovered this. Yes, I admit that I am one of those who are also displeased about the ending of the anime so 'what if' fics are always of interest to me, particularly those that explore Albert and Edmond's relationship more in depth. Since your fic fits all these criteria, by default, it must be made of awesome according to my books :D

And to answer your question in your author notes, Albert was using the name 'Herrera' after his mother's maiden name. (Or at least that's what he did in the novel. In the anime, it looks like 'Herrera' so I kinda put two and two together and just assumed that that was it.) :P

I am honestly looking forward to reading more of this. You are doing an absolute amazing job from these two chapters and I especially love how you portrayed a more jaded Albert while retaining some of his hopeless naivety and stubborness. He's just not Albert without those qualities but there's no way he could escape the events that he's been through without becoming bitter. You did a good job juggling between those as well as laying out the angst; it's not overwhelming but there's enough of it that it hurts.

I will be checking back for updates (and I hope you're not planning on abandoning this fantastic fic any time soon!) I want to see some more of your interpretation of Albert as he deals with the aftermath of everything that just went *wrong* in the anime ending. :D

Thanks for posting!
TheLadyGrey chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
Albert wrote 'Albert Herrera' as he signed the document.
Dizasteriffic chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
I'm really REALLY enjoying this so far. And what a cliff-hanger to leave off on- especially after such a long time of no update! I hope you haven't given up on this, I'd love nothing more than to find out what happens and where you're going with all of this.
French Curly Fry chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
this is great! to say i didnt like how the anime ended would be too nice. i HATED IT! DX i love how your continuing the sory and i want you to update soon! please? *puppy eyes* thanks for putting this much of the story up! ja ne! :D
kvvva chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
Even if I trully hated changed plot of anime, perhaps because I love book too much, I can only say to you that I really enjoyed your storry so far and please update soon.
Berry Lie Pie chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
So, after about a minute of searching, I find the review button. And I'm glad I did.

First of all, I must applaud you greatly. Your style is enjoyable, the plot is wonderful, and I find myself curious about how this will continue and, eventually, turn out!

Having just finished the anime (literally, I finished it about 10 minutes ago), I find this a fanfic I will certainly look forewad to reading more of, a good finish.
librarian chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
It was actually Herrera (at least in the novel it was Merc├ędes's maiden name, so Albert took it up after he apologized to the Count.)
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