Reviews for Nothing to do but Sleep and Dream
puiwaihin chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Nice take on the concept of the Dark One. I found the switch between the Dark One and Nate Radgon perspectives to be too abrupt, though.

The story shows promise and I think you're going about it the right way, starting small instead of trying to write a novel on your first try.
LadyAnnatar chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Light, that was CONFUSING! - but quite interesting too. I would bet my laptop that the "man" was Ishamael. I liked the story of how the One Power was..."invented". As your other reviewer pointed out, switching POVs can be rather tricky ESPECIALLY when BOTH are written in the first person. But I liked having some first-person Ishamael POV so I won't complain too much.
viggen chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
I don't like to see people slip through without any reviews. This story reads very much like a dream. It is unclear whether the antagonist is one of the Foresaken or intended to be the Dark One himself. The flipping POV was a bit weird. Your grasp of language is pretty good, though. If you keep practicing story writing, you will get much better.