Reviews for Contract Negotiations
Cocoa987 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
This is random, but good lord I see you EVERYWHERE. I reviewed your Mary Poppins story FOREVER ago, and also one or two of your PotC stuff (just read your little 'rant' about Pirates, and you are an incredibly good writer- Riley is the little person in my head, just as Jack and the gang are yours)

Anyway, I love the way you write (the Jack Sparrow rap makes me laugh. Hard.) (And the following musical scene)

So...yeah. I just thought I'd write in to say that you've made my day.

Cocoa D
LeonardoWillRebuildHisStudio chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
A great story. Very funny.
Autumnights chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Lol i would have had several cows if Reily had been killed.
Rebell chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
(giggles) This is brilliant! I wonder, which part would he have died in? Shot by Ian as the evil guy leaves them there? In any case... It works great as a oneshot, but I could see it becoming longer too.
RoeBoat chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
Sounds awesome- great concept! Update soon.

-Marty :-D
Miss Fenway chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Uh-oh. LOL. Now this sounds funny. :)
BandGeek58407 chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Hm...very interesting. It reminded me of some tidbit I heard from NT1's DVD that before Turteltaub/Bruckheimer (can't remember which) signed on, there were issues with the script. If you decide to continue, I'd be very curious to see where it goes! _
Receneck chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Hah sounds funny