|Reviews for Finding Danielle|
| DBNY94 chapter 4 . 12/20/2015
Why does your dialogue read like it's for an old video game? You know the ones with the incredibly awkward exposition heavy stuff that doesn't sound anything like how human beings would communicate.
| Nlresda123 chapter 19 . 11/20/2014
wth and then he sneezed?
| zoxy2 chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
oh my god i loved that scene it was awesomely funny, he's just like "i dunno jazz, i dunno"
| zoxy2 chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
what no if johnny dies i'd be crushed he's like my favorite ghost!
| zoxy2 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
was the guy with the foaming mouth who claimed to be from kyoshi that crazy dude from avatar: tla . because if so i so did not catch onto it until i read the statement again, and was like "oooooooohhhhhhhh, he's suppost to be that crazy dude fro avatar, that foamed at the mouth whenever Aang did anything cool, or anything really." man i loved that guy.
| zoxy2 chapter 10 . 12/30/2013
yea okay we'll pretend that's how the schedule works! ;)
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/19/2013
The guy with the foaming mouth went into cardiac arrest (Later he was okay. He kept claiming about being from some non-existant island named Kyoshi, so they sent him to an insane asylum).
AND I'VE DIED LAUGHING
| Random Reviewer chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
Does MyAibou know you used her concept?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
HEY, are you gonna post soon?! I WANT MORE!
| Michael chapter 5 . 6/5/2013
I don't think that Danny would be that demanding, and I'm pretty sure that while Danny and Dani are close like siblings that they see themselves more like cousins and not brother/sister or father/daughter.
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/20/2013
is there anymore?
(pouting) I WANT MORE!
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/20/2013
aww, poor dani
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2013
Yah go girl!
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/20/2013
yeah bring on tha fight!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/20/2013
stupid review thing it won't let me post my review cause someone else did the same thing! Anyways, keep writing girl! PS my favorite character is DANI