|Reviews for The Bet|
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/27
It was a good story, I really liked it, a lack of lemons for my liking bat it was good, bye and keep writing
| Trisha chapter 30 . 1/4
Aww! That was a cute ending . . . It seems I always pick fanfics with good endings.
Well, Sasuke and Sakura in here are just AMAZING,
I don't really know what else to say.
I really like your fanfic.
| MystikalFaery chapter 30 . 12/10/2014
Absolutely loved reading this book! It kept me up at night, could not put it down! Completely unputdownable :D you truly have such an amazing imagination, and such a way with words! Please don't stop writing, I hope you have more sakusasu and KakaSaku fics up your sleeve!
| Sandman's Dream Catcher chapter 30 . 10/31/2014
Honestly? One of the best works I have ever written on this site. Well done!
Once I started it, I just had to finish it! So I'm sorry if part of the review stops making sense, it's four in the morning over here and I'm running on three boxes of nerds. Lol
About the story, it's pretty incredible. You're right about how few cross-dressing fics are out there in the Naruto fandom. There's even few on well written ones, which I think is where your story falls under. You set out to write a fun fic, about a bet with more on the line than what they originally bargained for, and you delivered. From the plot to the characters, and steadily development of each element, I was left entralled, and pleading for more. I laughed, I cried, but mostly I laughed. Never have dreaded the ending to a story until this one. You truly have an art for story telling. With that said, I wish you the best in any future endeavors! Happy writing
| LadyHyuga101 chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
i love this chapter and i think the way you have portrayed the character of itachi is great.
| abiya stephen chapter 30 . 5/25/2014
this story rocks!
| larryjc chapter 30 . 4/18/2014
Finished this in less than 20hrs and I slept for like 8hrs in between. I rarely read SS fic if NH isn't a major pairing. But this is by far the best SS major fic I have read. Somethings almost put me off like naruto loving sakura, but it was all explained out well.
Sasuke still seems gay to me though, but I understand the concept of loving someone for who they are and not what sexual parts they have.
Simply put, I don't regret reading this. Rather, I am terribly glad I did. Too bad for karin though. After all she went through, it is sad she didn't get what she wanted.
I hope I get more of the same if not better from you. *salutes*
| DinosaurBrigade chapter 30 . 3/29/2014
I'm going to mention first off that I'm not a sasusake fan at all. My OTP involves naruto and sasuke being together and anything else is just plan wrong. So obviously this isn't the kind of thing I'd normally read, but the summary made me curious. Then as I was skimming the first chapter, I got caught up in story. And before I knew it, I ended up reading way more than I'd ever planned. I'm just a sucker for good writing, a decent plot, and nice storytelling apparently.
Now I don't know how common the cross-dressing girl gets the guy thing is, but I have to say you did it right. I appreciate sakura being a bit of a struggling tomboy because otherwise her character would have been full of too much false acting; this way she is able to stay very much a real person. Although, I do find it interesting that you almost make her seem as if she's partially transsexual, specifically that little bit at the end.
The second thing I liked about this story was how you portrayed sasuke's attraction to sakura. He might have been confused, but he ultimately didn't question this 'good' thing too much. As a pansexual, I like that he is attracted to who she is and not her body in the realistic way. Way too often the character is attracted to and wants to sex up a person of gender 'a' only to find out the person is really 'b' instead. The problem comes when the character has only known about 'a' the whole time and somehow magically attracted to 'b' and forgets that they were ever the other gender. While sasuke is attracted to both Vince and sakura, he still thinks of her as the man he's known the entire time. This definitely helps the story feel real and right.
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/24/2014
Good. You made it right
| Guest chapter 24 . 3/24/2014
You have six chapters to bake this right.
| emachiin chapter 30 . 3/24/2014
'Tis was such a good read. One of my favorite AU tbh.
| emachiin chapter 27 . 3/24/2014
I would have never expected her to strip. The best.
| ILoveSxS chapter 30 . 3/20/2014
that was an amazing fanfic! I finished it in one day
| yourstruly247 chapter 30 . 2/28/2014
Congrats on completing this awe-inspiring story!
What's there to say? This story is the embodiment of perfection. While I'm supposed to be working on my coursework, here I am completely sidetracked by your masterpiece. I don't know if this feeling inside of me is elation (from a wonderful ending) or melancholy (at the thought that it's the end). Either way, you have set the bar for fanfiction in my opinion.
There is no criticism I can offer, Sasuke's transition into loving Vincent was absolutely smooth, and his acceptance of his love for Sakura was justified by the cliche (yet much loved) fact that he loves her for her personality and not her looks. This revelation does give me hope that a love like this does exist in the real world. So thank you for that.
Your writing is fluent, expressive (but not overly emotional) and thought-provoking. Somehow you have managed to perfectly combine emotive writing with a strong storyline.
Thank you for writing this fic, it's probably my favourite out of every fic I've ever read on this site.
Thanks once again, and good luck in all you do! :)
| Akiha suzuki chapter 12 . 1/20/2014
What movie? I might want to watch it. I love your stories and I have read most of them. :)