Reviews for The Bet
Xyra Kaze chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
it sucks to be in love with your best friend and they don't notice. not that that has ever happened to me lol
Xyra Kaze chapter 9 . 1/17/2013
Wow bru! Deep and full of emotion.
Xyra Kaze chapter 8 . 1/17/2013
That was the BEST! Ending i have ever read in a story! Thank you soooo much! That was... i hsve no words.
Xyra Kaze chapter 7 . 1/17/2013
Lol, i love how you describe how confused sasuke feels about everything it is awesome.
Xyra Kaze chapter 6 . 1/17/2013
Lol I'm running out of words of praise lol but this just keeps getting better and better
Xyra Kaze chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
Thank you for not making itachi and ass! That means a lot to me. I almost cried in this chapter! Well done
Xyra Kaze chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
This chapter made me kind of sad, but I am glad you gave us this info and that you brought itachi into the story!
Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
Wow! The end was very deep! I like it a whole lot! Thanks for writing this!
Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
This was such an awesome chapter! I can't even point out anything bad cause there isn't!
Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Wow! This is amazing I would never have thought about writing something like this! Pure genius!
Colette Hyuga chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I simply love this
renzie17 chapter 30 . 1/4/2013
I loved it! It's hard to come across good fanfiction these days so I'm really glad I found this. XD
Three things though, if you don't mind constructive criticism:
1) Karin was a bit OOC, but I loved how you made Hinata evil when she snaps (I sort of envision her as such haha!).
2) I saw a lot of typos. I suggest you reread thoroughly before posting. :D
3) I liked how you made everything all better in the end-like how Sakura's school documents and the like were covered up and she was able to get back to Suna again. :D
All in all, this was a fun story full of romance, comedy and drama. I applaud thee. Haha!
Keep up the awesome!
So much love from
renzie17
Farruca chapter 30 . 1/1/2013
Great story ! I love Naruto, I'm crazy about FF7 , and you manage to write a romantic story where (in my opinion) Sasuke is not OOC)
AWESOME)
Hidan'sLoyalGirl chapter 30 . 11/29/2012
Your stories are so good! I'm probably gunna end up reading all of them. Bad thing is i'm still pretty sick, but I'm taking nausea pills to stop from throwing up every time I read lol. Now... On to the next one!
Bloomart124 chapter 30 . 11/11/2012
First off, I've read this before and I have to mistake on not reviewing!

It was absolutely perfect! I love the idea of Sakura's cross dressing to Naruto's adorableness to Itachi's alcoholic problem. :)

This was really amazing! I loved all of it, and I would kill to do gymnastics or motocross!

Always, keep writing! ;)
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