Reviews for Making Babies Takes More Than Biology |
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![]() ![]() Some of the sex scense are so poorly placed, cringey, and so uncharacteristic that I skip them and pretend they aren't there lol |
![]() ![]() The writing was good but I don't think you got Booth quite right in this story, he definitely lost some of his sweetness and charm. I also felt like like the will they/won't they dragged on way to long, Brennan's naivety and refusal to make a decision became annoying and both characters' inability to communicate clearly was also irrating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why would you tag this story as completed when it isn’t? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the story! you were never ooc and that’s great! but i was kinda dissapointed with the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS CRUEL |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay this chapter made me cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() explaining parker how babies are made was funny haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() why can they just say the love each other already? :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() why would you give max a heart attack?! that's just mean :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've written their first time different from other authors here in this site but it was good, refrshing. I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 10 years later and this story is still amazing the second time round. I think we would all love to see it finished off should you ever want to return :) |
![]() ![]() Me encanto! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too many twist's and turns and no flow sorry but appreciate your endeavours but not for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() You got me I'm reading thinking maybe it's a dream. But along with the other readers I'm sure you caught everybody off-guard. Touche |
![]() ![]() It’s clear that it’s been many years, but this’s so good that you should at least update on the birth of the baby! I was kinda late to FanFiction so it sucks that nobody really writes Bones fic anymore (crying face emojis) lol but I really loved your writing! |