|Reviews for Making Babies Takes More Than Biology|
| Krazzy Kezz chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
o, i so just wanted him to yell "no, i dont want all that stuff. i just want you!" after her. argh!
PPS, i really like!
| TheLifeILive chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Oh the miscommunication. I felt terrible for both of them at the end.
Really looking forward to the next chapter!
| celtic33 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
why do I have the feeling that Sweets roleplay would've involved them assuming parental roles anyway? :)
| Africancharm chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
This is a good idea for a stroy, all though there are a few attempts aound trying to deal with this concept your attempt looks to be a very good one.
Your look into Booths feelings on the situation and how he feel about his relationship with his son already is a very good and insightful one. I look forward to how you handle this and hope you keep it true to the charecter. Look forward to reading more soon.
| Bond.Jane chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Holy Mother of God! This was... hilarious, heart breaking, sweet... You really pack a punch, lady! I'm so staying tuned to this one! I can see it play out in front of me: Brennan's dead pan speech, Booth freaking... Poor Booth! Role pay, yes, that would have been the safest bet!
| KatieBeth503 chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I've been waiting for someone to explore this whole thing. I am nervous about how they're going to write it (I'm hoping for 'maybe someday' a la JAG rather than 'sperm now please' a la I don't know what) and anyways so far I'm impressed with your take on it. You're going to write fast, right? Because fast is good. And it makes me want to review. And have I mentioned that I hate politics and I need fanfic to take me away from the current annoying state of things? And that fanfic withdrawl coupled with constant annoyance tends to induce insanity which is detrimental to anyone in the immediate vicinity? So see, if you care about the world at large, writing fast is beneficial! :P Anyways in this chapter I really liked how you wrote her less than confident when she was asking him about it... this doesn't seem like the sort of thing that even Brennan could underestimate the gravity of. Can't wait to read more!
| LocoGreggo chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Excellent plot. Onward full speed ahead.
| rosyle chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Looking forward to reading more. :)
| Shadowedkiss chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Nice beginning- I like the way the story is going so far
| mumrulz chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Loving this already...such potential! :-)
Somehow I don't think that Brennan has fully thought this through, especially if the dog comment is anything to go by:
**“I was quite prepared to take on the commitment of adopting a dog, and it struck me that a child would have similar needs.
“Bones, you can’t compare a dog to a baby!”
“I really don’t see why not. They are both mammals that have a complete dependency on their primary carer.”
...hm...wonder if she is planning to keep the baby locked up all day with a bowl of food & water while she is at work?
Also she didn't factot into the equation, how much Booth already suffers at being only able to occassionally see Parker, & that he would not what that scenario to happen again...or is she planning on a relationship with Booth to go along with the baby? Think that she had better have a good long talk with Booth. LOL.
Loved that Sweets knew where this conversation was heading, before Booth did! :-)
**Rubbing his head with his open palms he realised he should have opted for the role-play.
Looking forward to B&B's next discussion...will Brennan be able to explain her expectations to Booth...& how will he receive them. :-):-):-)
| MapleCheerUp chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Cute! I can't wait to read more.
| FireFlyFlicker chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
lol that was SO funny! I'm not sure if tempe really thought that whole 'i want you to be my babies daddy' thing through especially since booth is trying really hard all the time not to jump her bones! lol haha that is a funny pun! lol
| goldpiece chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
LOL. I always love this scenario because everytime Brennan broaches the subject, she never quite says what she's thinking. And what makes me laugh about that is because if she straight out told Booth that she wants to be in a relationship with him, it would somehow be out of character, because of course she thinks he already would jump to the conclusion that she meant he'd be there with her through the whole process... unless she really does want him to be a glorified donor... yeah right.
Great job. Looking forward to more.
| HawkAngel XD chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
that's right... I'm with Booth in this one... good plot, update soon please
| QuimbyCub chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Wow, I rarely read multi chaps, but this is good. Really good, great plot, and I LOVE the dog/baby comparison, very rational. LOL. Anyway, more, please.