|Reviews for Midnight Margaritas|
| kitten007 chapter 3 . 11/5/2008
God yes, Jasper is definitely beyond sexy. but i think i tell you that everytime...
you are a devilish writer. and i absolutely love it. Bad idea on my end to read this in class... thank god i'm in the back row... ;) anyways, i have a friend who lives in Alabama... i think i may have to pay him a visit sooner than i expected. We talk on the phone every so often, and i absolutely MELT at his drawl. :)
| Shorty808 chapter 3 . 11/5/2008
Jasper is totally sexy. :D And yes, another chapter! Please please please!
| KD Skywalker chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
i want more! cute story so far! I have a Jasper/OC fic...you might want to check out...its called 'Two of a Kind'
| Shdwcat27 chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
Very cool story. Please continue.
| Migs4JasperWhitlock chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
make it a story!
| FreezingFire81 chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
yes yes i would like another chapter please! really love this story! hope you can update soon!:)
| muggleinlove chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
Ofocourse another chapter!
I'm an Edward girl, but I can separate the 2. (LOL)
Looking forward to more!
| kitten007 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
aww. shoot. I'm melting all the way over here under Jasper's sweet talking southern drawl, and not complaining... of course Edward isn't the bad guy... he's just stupid - and the ex. which makes him a little bad, just not horrible.
i like it. you should keep it up. :)
| Sheena Is A Punk Rocker chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
I love how original this is. ]
| Ssenillek Reh chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Okay, so, honestly, it's heartbreaking to see Edward and Bella like that, but I can kind of understand it. Haha.
But, admittedly, the first thing I can really think to comment on is how you should've said tyou could've cut the tension with a blunt spoon, as opposed to a dull knife. XD
And Jasper is just too sweet. I really like that this chapter is from his point of view, though I was a little confused at the beginning. - But, that may just be my own fault. XD
Still, though, I feel terrible for poor Edward, even though it's kind of his fault to begin with. ? All I'm saying is, if it meant having sex with that hunkuvaman, I'd totally wait until marriage. XD Still, I know where Bella's coming from, too. I mean, proposing right after a fight? He's clearly not too girl savvy. Bahaha.
And really, poor Jazz, too. I mean, Edward IS (was?) his friend. Talk about awkward turtle. To the extreme.
So, in short (too late, LOL), yes, I liked it, and YES, another chapter would be muy bueno. Are you loco? The story est fantastique, so far. I can't wait for more!
That being said... well, no, actually, that's it. I think. Bahh. XD
| sanglin chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
As I previously said, I want this story to continue. I think it has merit, and an interesting plot so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| ObsessingOverEdward chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Southern comfort indeed.
OMG! That he even thought to pick up the clothes and put them in the hamper made me swoon with lust! If only!
As for the fight, it's a little hard seeing Edward want Bella and her not want him back, since their soul mates and all. However, I loved Jaspers reaction and it was kind of fun to see Bella punch someone besides a wherwolf.
Can't wait for the next one.
Thanks for sharing!
| icefang7 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
this is awsome! great chap. please another chap soon?
go bella! lol...thanks
| miawmiaw chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Yes! More chapters please, only if it remains Jasper/bella pairing with minimal interference from Edward. Hope Edward remains a nice guy even though he's the ex
| twilighter1994 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
WOT WOT WOTY!