Reviews for The Fourth Incident or, Monetary Compensation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! You’re story is so funny and well written! Thank you for the laughs! |
![]() ![]() Hiya! I just wanted to say that I really adore your GL fics, and especially your take on Viral. Commenting on this one because it's my favorite that you've got up on , but my all-time favorite of your works was the Old!Simon/Viral fic that used to be up on your LJ. (Can't remember the exact title, "Older and Far Away"? Or something like that?) It's not up anymore, which I can't fault you for (I'm also one of those people who wouldn't want my own explicit writing available for public consumption in this day and age), but I just wanted you to know how much I really loved it. Hope everything is going okay for you! If you're still writing (fanfic, original work, whatever), awesome, I hope it's going well! If you've moved on to bigger and better things, good for you! Thank you for sharing some great fanfic with the rest of us. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, really, how you can make immortality a serious concept one fic and a laughingstock the next. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, this is probably the funniest story about Viral that I have read... basically ever. I did NOT expect that plot twist about the kidnappers being vivisection fetishists, but it went off so smoothly with the rest of it, not to mention the addition of all of Viral's reactions to the situation, I just read it three times over in one sitting. Not to mention how he finally managed to get himself out of it Outstanding work, and I expect this will be a fic I'll be re-reading over and over again. |
![]() ![]() Seriously? Vivisection porn? He's completely invincible, and they use him for PORN? If it were me, I'd try getting his assistance in teaching a class of medical students. At least then somebody's benefiting from it, rather than jacking off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() trololololololol. viral you sexy beast... no wonder you have a crowd of fangirls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, probably! ~Kitty |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was horrifying in the funniest way possible. I never thought I would laugh at the phrase "frolic in my guts," let alone read it. It makes a certain amount of sense, really. An immortal is bound to attract all sorts of attention-even this kind. The entire affair was really jarring. One moment you have these characters being mostly harmless and kooky, then it's right back to discussing their torture fetish. Stuff like that. The story swings back and forth between the horrific and the hilarious so often it's hard to find footing. That's hardly a bad thing. In fact, I say it's a testament to your skills as a writer that you can zig zag between the two without the story flopping altogether. Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant. YOU are brilliant. Oh Viral, you poor dear. I absolutely loved reading this, and I can't help but feel curious about incident #2. The way you write Viral actually delights me. Haha, it's so hard to find good Gurren Lagann fic, so this is really a treat. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best things i have ever read. I was laughing aloud for ages! Viral kidnappebed by freakin Pornographers! Truly you are a warped and hilarious mind. i thank you for giving me this gift XD *hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had no idea what was going on, but it was still funny. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, I love your characterization. 'Offense taken, asshole!' I'd never really given a thought to the fact that the Beastmen would eventually die out. I figure the Science Institute would work on some way to alleviate that. This story makes me wonder what other Distant Timeskip gems I've been overlooking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This got a smile outta me, to be sure. :] Very nicely done. I'd like to see more writing, please. I will beg if necessary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. That was certainly an interesting concept for a story. XD Though what really made me laugh out loud was the Kamina money. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD at first i thought he was kidnapped by furries |