|Reviews for What Became of You|
| nodiggynondoubt chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Wow, this almost brought me to tears! :') I don't usually read anything containing drugs but I have to say. This was a pretty damn good story! :D I can't wait for the sequel!
Lol MasterCard! XD
| akuroku fan on fire chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
yay! i actually logged in. and i looked at my old review. omg, did i really spell story as storie? but whatever. that was then and this is now. needless to say i have improved my grammar greatly.
im rereviewing because i lost this story after i read it the first time. i meant to put it into my favorites but i forgot until 3 months later. i woke up and went onto fanfiction and was like "hmmmm, where was that story where roxas was on meth and axel was trying to save him." i was fustrated. i spends weeks trying to find it. i searched "akuroku roxas drugs." but i couldnt find it. i was upset that such a wonderful story was not on my favs.
BUT I FOUND IT! i searched up "roxas monster" and POP! it showed up on the list. i cannot tell you how immensely pleased i was.
but never mind all that ranting! time for "the actual review."
axel in the ghetto and WOW im impressed with the description so far.
NUUU! roxas, what the fuck where you thinking? stop cutting. axel, save him from himself!
dont lie to axel,roxas! or youll get a spanking XD
oh,well,damn. roxas wasnt using! hurray! first step complete
awww. that kiss made me all warm and tingly inside.
LE GASP! roxas! how could you sell your body,to saix,out of all people. ewwwww
AXEl: the magical medic extraordinaire! you go axel.
aww, no flashback?
omg, this part reminds me of the song rehab by amy winehouse. "they trying to make me go to rehab and i wont go,go,go." roxas doesnt want to go to rahab!
damn you saix! you bastardo! axel! do something!
bam pow! right in the kisser! XD served you right freak. i love the note too.
oh noes, roxas. you can keep it together! hes going insane! WITHDRAWLS suck...
year later? everything going good.. but wait, what is this?
nuuuuu,dun go roxy!
dadadada! axel to the rescue!
awwwww, happy moment! and happy ending :D that makes me happy too :D
wonderful ending to a wonderful story. i loved it
over 9000/10 stars
| Fox-Sin chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
thats so cute
| Too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Well, it was really good, although the couples parts seem to be emotionally switched throughout most of it. I guess some people have a different outlook on the couple.
Your grammar was excellent, and not many writers can get a flow going like that. Although, I was a little disappointed with some parts. It seemed like Roxas was way too willing and eager to be perfect... You've never had experience with drugs or an addict, have you?
It was, however, an amazing story. You have tallent, keep writing!
| akuroku fan on fire really chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
hey its me... akuroku fan on fire... i love the storie.. and even when axel smashed saix... i was laughing my a$$ off. :) nice storie. i love the ending. i really hate sad endings. XD anywho, imma check in on you to see if you have more stories... maybe ill actually stop being lazy and log on so i can properly review.. yah *sigh* this is my sorry excuse for a review
| my friend chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Bag of crystal: $100, Smashing Saix face: Bloody knuckles, Watching said bag of crystal swirl down tolite: Priceless.
For this there’s Axel.
For everything else there’s a MasterCard." XD that was so funny!
at some parts i was so worried for rox. i know it does not sound big, and it is not, but i am an addicit to caffine. and i really do go through withdrawls when i try to quite. i gave up trying to quit, but i really wish i could cuz i got EDNOS (an eating disorder) and i want to see myself like everyone else does, but i can;t. i need to eat healither so i can feel better, but it is SO hard!
oops! i rambled. sorry. let me know when/if there is a prequeal/sequeal!
| Cyhyr chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I've already read this...
And I've already told you what I thought about it...
I guess you don't need to read what I have to say, then, huh? You've already heard it- while you were writing it, nonetheless.
See you in cheerleading!
| KeiraRizu chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Aw! This was so cute!
But... dark also. Usually I get all dissappointed when I see there is no sex-
But this one was so fulfilling, that I'm just... fulfilled lol
Great Job! Thank you for the awsome read
| SkyeFlyte chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Great story, I loved it!
| random-laughter chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
This was actually a really good one-shot. I enjoyed how you wrote Roxas' work at trying to overcome his addiction, and the fact that Axel helps him without ever trying to use their relationship against him was great. At least, that's what I THINK he was doing :)
Anyway, great job with this!
| Kitty-Cat-Kauri chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
LOL! Priceless XD
I loved it, not much more I can say then that, really sweet ending. :)