Reviews for You Are Mine
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
Poor Cadmia! Oh the horror! :(
DawnfireJazz chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Poor Cadmia. But a great story.
shadow12 chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
This was really good! You should make more of these. Of all slash related tfa stories this was my fav. And for this story I thank you. Keep up the the great stories!
EHSparkwoman chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
OMP! That's so hot! But poor Cadmia!
Lady Wratt chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Proxy on the loose chapter 2 . 12/25/2011
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah why don't u write more plzzzzzzzzz7zzzzzzzzzzzz for the sake of my SANITY!

* Explodes*

* ahem* sorry bout that my insanity was early but anyway I enjoyed this story very dark and some what Smexy you did a really good job I hope I see more like these in the future

killer chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
you know, i could see a whole other chapter: What if Cadmia 'amused every decepticons whims' in the rec room? wink wink.
MissMary chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
I got chills reading this..well done.
dixiegurl13 chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Whoa. Glad I stopped by to peruse my fav stories from your collection. Didn't know you extended this one, but boy am I glad you did!

That was freakin' hot! I'm shaking from head to toe. Now I need to go take another shower, you've gotten me so hot and bothered! God, you make Starscream sound so sexy! Cadmia gets to have all the fun, dang it! Thanks for the addition; it made my night!
StarSwoop chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
ooohhh, deffo the second version!
Valong chapter 2 . 5/18/2010

I mean abused ! Im sorry, my english is quite horrible... -.-
Valong chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Hey hey,very nice...I love it ! :D

If, than I only have one point of criticism...Ambusing scenes make me feel (a bit)..."uncomfortable". But its ok (its a story, only a story ;)).

Actually I love sensual, erotically (and mooore ?) storys with Starscream and femmes (and I like TFA Starscream, but I prefer G!/Armada ;)). The problem is...there is far too few of them ! So Im quite happy that I found your story. I really hope you will write some more storys like this in the future. :)

Another thing (and now my little perv is creeping out of the corner of his hideout)...Do you know "Flesh and Blood" (with Rutger Hauer) ? There is a kidnaped princess named Agnes. She gets ambused and raped from the mercenary Martin (Hauer) - but she turns the tables - and then you should see his face...Just priceless ! Haha, THIS should happen to Starscream...:D

Oh, I would love to see his face, know his thoughts AND feelings...;) Im bad (I know - but only sometimes ;))...
DzeniiBee chapter 2 . 12/4/2009
awesome...gotta love starscream
StormRaven333 chapter 2 . 11/26/2009
I was wondering why I was thinking about chocolate sauce at the mention of liquid energon…

You are bad! XD

Brilliant as always!

Taipan Kiryu chapter 2 . 11/12/2009
Oh, please let the sin continue!

Instant promises of pleasure aroused the moment I saw your update. This story’s only flaw was being one chapter length, but thankfully you corrected such lack of balance of the Universe.

The sexual predator circling his prey… I loved those lustful optics getting close to Cadmia, already taking over her with the single shine of their desire. Starscream is a piece of hot stud himself, but you certainly know how to write him and give him that sensual scent that melt us like chocolates under the most merciless sun. We become monsters envying Cadmia, but also enjoying her ‘torture’.

Starscream certainly knew how to secure her submission. If someone knows the balance between kindness and domination, that has to be him. He could have subdued her brutally, but he forced her to choose instead, and choose him of course. Having that since the beginning guarantees his victory, and Cadmia’s pleasure, although she is too humiliated to admit it. But Screamer’s intimate skills would provide, shutting her decency off. What he did with that energon sweet was simply one of the hottest scenes I’ve ever read in this site…

But what about the oral game? Oh sweet sweet Primus… thank you for the pleasures provided…

You really make it difficult to review with scenes like that. Who could write logically after such a heat? I’m going to have to wear my ‘Decepticons, plug in’ shirt and swim all the way to the Nemesis pleading to be taken. What you do with decent girls like me is not correct, tss tss…

Just a little answer to Cadmia. Why was she degrading herself like that? Because she was adoring it, dear ;o) Good that she had time to enjoy the sound of her moans, seems that there will be more to come.

Delicious chapter here! Coming from you, it doesn’t surprises, but highly pleases. I hope you will write more about this. Whether alternate scenarios or sequels… but please continue.

Once again, you made my day and I know somebody that will love you for the mood you just put me in… Now just a personal question: What have you been doing lately? Seems to me that you know what you are writing about, ahem :oP
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