Reviews for Impossible
Guest chapter 6 . 6/6/2016
i know this fic is old as fuck but it's super transphobic, which none of the characters in superjail are, and imo this jared is written really badly, implying he didn't always have anxiety is erasure. bye
Twinkel13 chapter 11 . 8/16/2011
this was.. weird.. really, really weird

the pairing is great, the plot was pretty good but the whole thing, the way you wrote it caugh me off guard 8(

The first chapters were good, but I had a hard time to get the rest.

I can see the poetic about writing the way you did in the last chapters, I've read stuff like that before, I know poetic weird stuff since I've read Triagles by DemiHuman123

this was kinda like that.. just less awesome.

this fic you made was, like I said, good in meany ways, but because your lack of...(something?), because of all the weirdness, it lost a few points from me.

I'm not flaming, I'm just being honest and I hope your future FanFictions will be better as you learn more
wouldsomebody chapter 11 . 8/4/2010

Great story. Really well-thought-out.
wouldsomebody chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
1. carry offspring in womb: to carry offspring in the womb, or develop as offspring in the womb

2. develop ideas in mind: to develop in the mind, or allow an idea or plan to develop in the mind

Those are the two definitions of "gestate." Perhaps the word you were looking for was "gesticulating." :)

Anyway, besides that simple mistake, You have an excellent writing style, and I'm already hooked into the story. Normally I'm not a slash fa, even with Superjail. O_O But I like this very much, and I've only read the first chapter. Keep it up!
Romioca chapter 11 . 3/29/2009



This is so amazing. Your writing style really captures Jareds thoughts and takes a true likeness of him. Seriously, I feel like I'm in his head which was obviously your goal. The reactions fo everything pull together nicely somehow and..just...DAMN
Gooooone chapter 11 . 3/5/2009

I loved it

it was strange

just like SuperJail is suppose to be

Of course, I always thought the Twins-

oh wait

I was about to tell you I thought the twins were on the same side as the Warden, but, ahh, I see, from your story, they totally are

Gooooone chapter 10 . 3/5/2009
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg


omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

I just can't believe the Warden said something like "Everyone loves me, right?" RIGHT AFTER JARED JUST


Gooooone chapter 9 . 3/5/2009
ohh, gawd

Was that Really the WArden?


just one of the twins?


oh no

You're making me love Jared, btw ]
Gooooone chapter 7 . 3/5/2009
I knew it, I knew it, I KNEW IT



What could they be up to?

/reads more
Gooooone chapter 6 . 3/5/2009
This is my guess

she is one of the twins



just guessing

Love the story

really well written
Gooooone chapter 4 . 3/5/2009
I'm really starting to like this fic

I can't wait to get to the end.
Melissa E.M chapter 11 . 2/7/2009
... This entire story managed to blow me away so much that I can't find a single adjective to describe exactly what I think of it.

Wonderful job.
JIM TIME chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
Oh man oh man oh man

Dear god, what an AMAZING fanficion.
Spike Daft chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
This was AMAZING. My eyeballs dried out because I was so into this story that I forgot to blink.
Cinnamin-chan chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
This story is way too good. I just started watching Superjail! and I already have fallen in love with the characters thanks to you. (I'm a slash-addict, so it's lucky for me to find a fic like this!) Your writing is wonderful. Please write another story for this pairing!
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