Reviews for 4 a - Song of the Messaline
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
I like it. WRITE MORE! :D
Laura Harkness chapter 4 . 8/27/2009
i loved this:

mussing up the man’s hair in a very rare show of affection

and this:

even if said lips hadn’t quite got the memo

AND this:

the Doctor spun in the air as if scenting blood


this is gorgeous and dreamlike and exquisite. lovely, lovely words. beautifully crafted.

once again compared to your artistry i feel mundane, plebian.
Otter Child chapter 4 . 8/27/2009
Lovely bit with his daughter...but I really didn't want those images of Jack in my head! Men!
Lynse chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
Yes, I definitely get lost in descriptions! Fortunately, part of it is taking place as if in a dream, or that is to say a dream-like state of mind, what with the wandering around in the Doctor's head, but at least there are some rocks to climb up on to get my bearings. :-) A cute continuation of your previous story so far, although I must admit I am a bit confused-is this with the Doctor or the Doctor's clone or, when examining the mind of the Time Lord, is it a combination of both, harking back to the connection of the previous story? (Me, I probably missed a line somewhere, sorry...)
Laura Harkness chapter 2 . 12/3/2008
oh... nice: "those brown eyes that held a thousand sadnesses"

and nice: "The memory of water came to his mind"

o and really, um, nice: "until a hand grabbed him, a long fingered hand" (you know me)

lovely. i love the last two paragraphs. could read pages and pages of that... nothing else. it'd be heaven.
Otter Child chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Oh, very cute! I'll have to read the rest of this.