Reviews for Haunted Princess
thebeautifulbicky chapter 5 . 2/27
The dialogue between Susan and Caspian was cheesy. Way too cheesy. Like, Pizza Hut cheesy.

But the ending with Aslan fixed all of that. Great fic! I like the chapter length, it's a good size, and more importantly I like the plot and the character development.
thebeautifulbicky chapter 3 . 2/27
I like how it's Peace with a capital P. You're funny :P
thebeautifulbicky chapter 2 . 2/27
I think it would make more sense if Rabadash DID rape Susan, otherwise the mental scars wouldn't run quite so deep. Probably. Maybe I've read too many dark fantasy books and my notion of mental sanity is a bit twisted. Ah wells, great character development. And good writing. Nice work.
Hope chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
I'm almost crying, that was so sad and beautiful. Your story was great!
TwiTragic13 chapter 5 . 3/8/2013
Oh God, I sobbed the whole way through...
smexy dog chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
I love your story! Especially the bond between Caspian and Susan and the pevensie siblings. Love protective and loving brothers!
Aliit Vodeson chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
I loved it! Amazingly written with a great amount of attention to detail. You did a wonderful job on this story. I don't mind the length of the chapters at all.

Thank you for writting
Aliit Vodeson chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
I actually really like this chapter. Having the message of how it's not her fault actually get through to Susan come from some one she doesn't know very well fits more with her character.
Supernatural-Girl17 chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
basaltone chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
Beautifully written, but so sad, made me cry at times. That part with Peter and Edmund and the armor really got to me for some reason. Thank you for your story.
WillowDryad chapter 5 . 4/5/2012
That was very nicely done. Thank you.
bamagurl11 chapter 5 . 9/4/2011
THANK YOU! I am glad you did not make Aslan go back on a decision or let them defy him like every one else.. I this story worthy of a comment so count you self lucky.
ArankaLeonie chapter 5 . 8/18/2011
Hey, I know you wrote this a couple years back but I just want to say that I really enjoyed reading it! I like how you really took time reflecting on Susan's emotions because some fanfics seem to be sad and depressed one moment and when the saviour (in this case caspian) comes in, all is perfectly fine in right away. This wasn't the case here so great job!
yamikinoko chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
Wow. I was actually about to toss this out, when you added so many adult elements to my favorite child's story [but in hindsight, not too much, which is interesting, in and of itself]. But then you portrayed each character's emotions and personalities flawlessly, as well as the dual consciousness of the Pevensies in such a manner that I was convinced that this could have happened in canon.

And I particularly love this last chapter, because it not only depicts human wants and sufferings, but also the love, patience, and omnipresence of Aslan [which, for some reason, don't always come out right in fanfiction]. Beautifully done.
ibelieveintruelove chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
Oh my gosh. This was amazing! So much more than just a story of Caspian helping Susan overcome her past. So many emotions here! It's definitely one of the best Susan/Caspian love stories I've read - their relationship here is so real, so full of emotion and respect and love. Their goodbye scene is also one of my favorites, it was so well written. And I liked that you had Aslan comfort Caspian at the end and explain things to him - that was very important I think. Wonderful job!
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