Minerva77 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
"She makes me feel like I have a soul." I LOVE THAT :)

Mia your writing is passionate... Minor mistakes is all great writer's work... As long as you have passion to drive you, keep at it... :)

Much Love (Always)


Boonah chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Really interesting hearing how Edward thinks. Lots of thought went into this and I'm sure more could be added, lol hint* I'll defo review if you decide to continue this ;). Great ideas again well done for puting yourself out there cause you can only go from strength to strengh :). Xxxx
TheBellaInMeForever85 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This fic, a one shot, is in need of some almost reads like a Prose Poem. Some grammatical errors and some punctuation errors, that make it difficult for the words to "breathe". How ever, this one-shot has great potential, and some key points in which you zeroed in, many one-fic authors would not. I salute you. Keep improving.
TeamAllTwilight chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I like that you gave us more of an insight to Edwards thoughts...I wish that SM would finish Midnight Sun...I woudl really love to hear all his thoughts on all the books not just Twilight...But I love the way he thinks.
SmirkingNat chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
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allikittenkat1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was really interesting.