Reviews for Why Was That?
elyse chapter 1 . 3/1
as far as mori being ooc goes, the anime basically showed him as a side character - i like how you have given him his own mind, I always thought he'd make a good match for haruhi. if anything, i hope you will consider adding more to this story, extending it for a few chapters to elaborate the morixharu relationship. i very rarely ask for oneshots to be extended so please take this as an extreme compliment :)
CrazyAnimeKittyGirl chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
That was cute! I didn't find a lot of grammatical errors. The one thing that bugged me, was that in several places in the story, you didn't put commas in the appropriate places. In other words, it would be somewhat hard to read certain parts out loud, without a proper pause. It wasn't total garbage either. Haruhi stayed well within character, because I remember her teasing Kyoya similarly in the episode, "Kyoya's Reluctant Day Out." And Mori doesn't always think about Hunni like people seem to think. In the episode "The Sun, The Sea and The Host Club," Mori is seen to be a bit more distracted. He was observing different things and more off in his own world while the twins were discussing what bathing suit Haruhi should wear and later, he was distracted when Hunni asked if a Haruhi would like to go hellfish shunting and even went a bit off to see Kyoya's private police people bringing sea creatures and shells TO the beach, before returning back to the others. So you actually stayed well in character for all of them, and the story doesn't seem to far off!
claraowl chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
That was adorable. Mori seemed very in character. XD
TheCrimsonShinigami chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Adorable! Loved it 3
fringeperson chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I liked Haruhi's quip to Mori there, and the way he reacted. Very good.
Yoshida Megumi chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
So cute! The end seemed a little out of character but it was otherwise adorable!
DarkFlameInfernal chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
love it
Eucalyptus Mint chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I liked it!
The Patchwork Cat chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I enjoyed it.
mindovermadness chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
it really doesn't seem all that ooc to me. we don't really know what goes on inside mori-kun's head. very cute story.
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I think everyone was in character and I can just imagine the scenario especially the winks Mori was getting, he is very attractive after all. I chuckled as I read it but it seemed to be cut short, like it was unfinished. I hope you'll write more.
Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Not as OOC as some of the fanfics I've read, which is good, but I don't know whether Mori is the type to be 'desperately' wanting something. But that's just me... ;P
xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
iits so cruel how she nver actually gets any otoru isnt it
KatSin chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
heehee. I liked this, it was cute _ I think you have them all nicely in character, considering how much is known about them. I can see Takashi wanting to shudder at a bunch of women winking and trying to get his attention.
StarMimi chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Ooh I liked this a lot!

It's very cute o

I think you did I good job writing them, they all seem to be in character.
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