Reviews for Naruto Unchained
benjamin chapter 12 . 5/16
muy buena historia...sabes de equipos deberias poner a (Ino- Hinata- naruto con Kurenai y a Anko como apoyo para técnicas de ataque) (chouji - kiba-shikamaru con azuma) y (sasuke- sakura- shino con kakashi) de esta manera seria gracioso ya que por miedo a los insectos a sakura se le negara el golpear a su compañero de equipo (naruto o kiba en otros fanfics) así los equipos están mas equilibrados teniendo un rastreador cada uno para sus misiones.

en el harem para naruto incluyendo a Hinata - Ino y Anko entre mis favoritas siempre estan: Tenten y Fu ambas por su personalidad energica otras serian temari, shion, ayame y tayuya solo recuerda no hacer un numero exagerado de chicas ya que eso arruina la historia en la gran mayoría.
benjamin chapter 2 . 5/16
si pon a tenten al harem es una de mis favoritas por su personalidad
acetwolf94 chapter 12 . 3/29
Guest chapter 12 . 3/1
please write more of this great story
ethan.lukkar chapter 12 . 1/28
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
lokyyt chapter 12 . 1/21
more please keep typing and please reply
Korin Dragoon chapter 5 . 1/13
Naruto's clones should be able to get/find E-C Rank jutsus in the ninja library as well as basic elemental training.
Korin Dragoon chapter 4 . 1/13
Uncontrollable speed is good for only one thing; traveling long distances quickly.

What are your thoughts on a resistance seal?
Korin Dragoon chapter 3 . 1/13
Chakra chains! Woo!
Korin Dragoon chapter 2 . 1/13
Kin & Tayuya have my vote, as to why, Naruto with the help of Kyuubi frees them from the Snake and promises to help them and Anko get revenge on the snake freak.
Borello chapter 12 . 1/13
damnit. i hoped to read how naruto fight against mizuki.
haremkingnaruto chapter 2 . 12/23/2017
not enough mature scenes
nadyr chapter 4 . 11/17/2017
Again with the shadow clone thing, refer to my previous post. I'm too lazy to type what's wrong in this chapter.
nadyr chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
I think your summoning and shadow clone theory in relation to the solid shadow clone is flawed. Shadow clones are not summoned, rather created, which are two completely different things. It sounds weird saying, "summon 300 shadow clones," you know? Saying a summon is a shadow clone with said summon providing the consciousness only is also not believable because that would infer that the user's chakra has the nature to mold into whatever the summons own nature is. This then follows into implying that the consciousness would be able to control and mold the chakra as it sees fit, but I don't think this would work either as technically the users chakra is foreign to the summon. Going further, your version of summoning would make reverse summoning pointless, as in Naruto's case, when he is reversed summoned to the Toad realm, he would only be able to have a shadow clone there, making any physical training impossible.

Sorry about the long spiel(idk if thats a word), just had to point it out.
reallnigga69 chapter 12 . 10/4/2017
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