Reviews for Things That Haunt Us
sprinkledwithpearls chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
I like it but i'm kind of confused.

Was that part at the end a memory?

So now she doesn't have Jasper, in present time?

Sorry i cant keep up (:

It seems really good, i'm just confused.
ms.switzerland chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
i realy like it
Ember Sage chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
This is really good! I kind of wish you would have told us what had happened after the lights in the ampitheatre went on... but I'm guessing you'll tell us eventually. Great job, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for an update! :D

-Ember
bitebella chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
omg its so good!
VoldieBeth chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
So Jasper was kidnapped when they were in the woods? Hmm... are you going to make it another flashback to flesh out that part of the story?

Other than that little confusion, I like the story so far. Alice's heart condition seems extreme but fine with the point you are trying to get across. I can't wait for more!
Lily Turwaithiel chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
I love it so far!

I can't wait to read the rest. And I really hope Jasper doesn't get shot, but I'm pretty sure that's what's going to happen...

I have to go to bed because it's so late here, but I'll read the rest tomorrow. Promise!

From now YOUR favorite reviewer XD

-LT
ms.switzerland chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
i'll read this later promise ]
Apple Slushie chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
this was really good.

the beginning was great but that as a surprise at the end. the guys still there isn't he, he'll pop out and BAM! I'm going to have a shower for speech night now and i dont say a speech i'm just watching great idea
Ember Sage chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Omg! So good! Please update soon! :D

-Ember
VoldieBeth chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Oh, interesting story. Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens next.