|Reviews for The Light in the Darkness|
| anonymous chapter 12 . 2/15/2011
You maKe me urinate rainbows. Please update
| Afrolady114 chapter 7 . 2/13/2011
I don't know why you said this is one of your worst written chapters. I thought it was very good! The connection between Amber and Soru is growing stronger, especially with the new move Amber is learning :) Makes me think of Star Wars with Master and Apprentice relationship :)
| Afrolady114 chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
hehehe, Paco. :)
Nice story you have so far. I'm looking forward to finishing it off ;) Absol is one of my favorite pokemon so that's a great reason to continue reading, right? :)
I like this switching views between Amber and Soru :) If you are interested, I have a fic that features my character as a Absol (but it's a Transformers fic XD) Keep up the great work!
| pls hurry chapter 12 . 2/12/2011
whats taking so long i whant to know what happens next this is TORTURE! why do you torture us?
im usually not one to complain but you cant give up on a story this good, if you have than you are a maniac who enjoys watching people suffer
POST THE NEXT CHAPTER IF YOU WANT TO BE CONCIDERED A GOOD PERSON!
thank you and have nice keyboard tapping day! :D
| tam007 chapter 12 . 2/3/2011
glad to see you come back !
For lastest chapter at the first. I think you don't write well like it was before...but I still continue it well as if you didn't go anywhere. Keep writing _
| Cerridwen-Maiden chapter 12 . 2/2/2011
She finally told him! I wonder how he's gonna take it...
| Gui chapter 12 . 1/27/2011
Are you going to update soon? Because it was quite some time since you updated. Also a im a sick bastard for wanting to read about Amber getting raped by Jet?
| person chapter 12 . 1/24/2011
Awww. Cliff hanger. :( why did kyle not take amber away? will soru understand where amber is coming from? Will he treat her differently? Has she seen the last of jet? Will my questions be answered? Anyway great story and good luck with college. :) update when you can!
| Shard chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
You're an amazing writer, the dialogue is what really makes this story worthwhile to read.
| Eevee5501892 chapter 12 . 1/21/2011
Holy god, this story drew my interest simply because I like reading stories featuring my favourite Poke's. I have also read the story that you say inspired this, and you have good inspiration.
I really enjoyed the story, the main plot may be a little twist off the classic human-to-pokemon that is so often seen, but it was very well written all the way through, every so often I would notice a hint for a later chapter, which I was happy to see.
Personally, I think (by the way you described how Soru was reacting to Amber finally starting to tell him at the end of this chapter) I think he will be believe her, although how he will react is another matter.
It is fine to be unable to update often, as I know college is often stressful to many, and i can simpathise.
I hope, whenever the next chapter comes, it will be just as brilliant.
| Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 12 . 1/11/2011
like the story so far, keep up the good work
| Homo Explosion chapter 12 . 1/11/2011
1. My favorite name is Amber.
2. My favorite pokemon is Eevee.
3. I LUV UR STORY. XD
| Unknown chapter 12 . 1/6/2011
I did notice a typo at the end: "perhaps only further confused by me trying to no", which doesn't make any sense at all.
Other than that, once again, great chapter. I can't wait for next one. CLIFFHANGER
| UBE Chief chapter 12 . 1/6/2011
I fully understand what being in college is like -.-
Less time with friends, family, and more workload than ever. Makes you wish for High School again, lol.
ANYways, this chapter brings out what Amber didn't want to be brought out, and in front of Soru, of all people (Pokemon, w/e, lol). Will this bring up a new rift between them, or will something else happen? I don't know, but the suspence is there to keep all of your readers hooked and waiting.
- UBE Chief
| carrieclamp chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
HIIIIII! im carrieclamp and im new here! :D
I loved your story! since i was 12 years old- more or less- i was a big fans of pokemón (Even now... im 22 years old xD, yeah D)
i hope u update soon, and why did he say she wasnt the eevee... mmmm... interesting... some strange and terrorific plan? Who knows o.o
keep the good work!
hugs from chile )