|Reviews for The Light in the Darkness|
| Knightfall66 chapter 14 . 11/12/2012
I remember reading this on Serebii some time ago, and I was saddened that it went inactive, but then I see this!
I'm really glad that this is back, and I'll keep reading, no matter what.
Knightfall signing off...
| pureflowersand2684 chapter 14 . 11/6/2012
Lovely, just lovely! I hope you update as much as possible! And I know how the work ethics of college can be. That's why if I ever have time during classes or something I just write out my stories for the future on paper and type it out later.
Your New Loyal Reviewer,
| RandomCitizen chapter 14 . 10/17/2012
I'm glad this story's alive. :D And with such a healthy lengthed chapter. :3
| RockytheTyranitar chapter 14 . 10/10/2012
Excellent story. Only one criticism. MORE UPDATES. Lol. You are very good though
| Doomsary chapter 14 . 10/5/2012
I really love this story! I cant wait to read your next update!
I hope your studies wont burden you too much. Sounds like you need a much needed rest!
| Stolloss chapter 14 . 10/4/2012
Well. I was pretty sure this story was gone. Glad to see it's not.
Soru and Amber's relationship is developing, slowly. The thought of Kirk coming back is obviously keeping Amber terrified, so hopefully Soru will be able to put her at ease in some way.
| death angel shadow kat chapter 14 . 9/22/2012
AWWWW i love this story
| Caltrop chapter 14 . 9/19/2012
As usual, another great chapter. Don't worry about deadlines. There are plenty of other stories on FanFiction that can entertain your viewers while they wait. In the mean time, consider college an opportunity to even further your writing skills. Your work never ceases to impress me! Keep it up.
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Awww! Soru is falling in love! It's so cute it almost makes me scream! Even if ya didn't mean for it to be cute, I still thought it was. Yay!
| Veloran-Darkfyre chapter 14 . 9/10/2012
Thanks for updating man. I was wondering if it was going to become stale. Message me if you need ideas, or if you want to chat about ideas. Personally, working on Trema is getting me grayer everyday and I am only 20! lol
| lolitard chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
I think I left a review here... two years ago or something.
Well, great chapter as usual It is amazing how you made me remember everything from the story, even if i haven't readed it for a long time :P
Please keep updating! Or at least try doing a new chapter until the end of this year? Please?
| Kagome love Hiei chapter 14 . 9/4/2012
:D update soon
| Vanjirra chapter 14 . 9/3/2012
Ohmigosh this is soooo cute update soon!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/2/2012
Ohhhhhhhh! Soru you DOG you!
| Last Warrior 7 chapter 14 . 9/1/2012
Okay first off, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FINALLY UPDATING. I know that if it took more than a whole year to do so, that means you stuck with it and didn't just give up on the story. fOr that I thank you, seeing that this story had been updated at last completly turned my day around. But question, what are you going to do now about chapter thirteen, which was just a message to the readers like me.
Also, i love the new cover on the story, can you tell me where you go it so I can download the full picture. The light in the darkness if my absolute favorite fanfiction story, and the fact that is now back up and running means so much to me.
As for the chapter, I can see them coming closer and you brilliantly depicted just how soru would react to that kind of statement. Your writing style is flawless as always, and it makes it feel like there was no gap in between her revealing the truth to him and then him accepting it.
I am going to guess he used to be a member of the street gang that jet used to be in, considering how they know each other. Still i don't know why this would affect her much, I mean he is a new person. umless he is somehow connected to beyond, which would explain why he was so willing to accept her story.
Amber and Soru's peronalities in this story are really well denifed and you continue to make their actions relavant to their nature rather than the excuse that you are the author and can make them act that way.
You writing in the light in the darkness is legendary, please don't stop. Again send me the link to where you got your cover please and
try not to go a whole year without an update please? Until the wonderful day when my email tells me that you have updated again, I wish you goo luck and please update soon.