Reviews for Tortured Love
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
its been a full year since you updated this story why dont u put it up for adoption so someone else can finish it . i believe when a story is started it should be finished its just not right to leave it or you readers hanging
Hikada chapter 9 . 3/8/2013
so nice, love your story please update soon
Minecraft chapter 7 . 3/1/2013
Maybe you could write that Alice doesn't completely satisfy jasper but bella is the only one who can always help jasper when he's down ?
Minecraft chapter 7 . 3/1/2013
It's nice to make emmet so forgiving to bells
VSPS chapter 9 . 8/12/2012
Hey there... Just read the first story and now your sequel... Great job! Don't give up. I'm loving it... You have so much potential for this story... If you really want some ideas/suggestions, PM me - I'd be glad to help... But really, you're doing great! - Vic
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
Updateee Soon
NatalieLynn chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
Actually, I thought it was a good chapter, just short. The ending really speaks to the love between Jasper & Bella is strong enough that she loves him no matter what diet he chooses. I kind of think he loves her with the same degree of acceptance. With Edward or Alice they each had to modify who they were to remain worthy of being their partner. They accept each other as they are. I think that's what would make them mates rather than partners or companions, I think when push comes to shove, and given time for feelings to grow between them, Edward and Alice would find themselves equally suited for one another to be mates also. I could have done without the whole Jim & Lacy bit though. A brief news blip on where the manhunt is would have served the purpose, or do you have more of a story in mind for the pair? Is one perhaps an undercover agent of the Volturi? If so, I can't see them being bogged down by playing the part of a human FBI agent.
CCBTH chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
you should make this a poly story with jasper/bella/edward
Karebears1981 chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
I like it. The could join peter char or even the volturi.
vane3x4 chapter 8 . 8/25/2011
Omg! I love ur story, PLEASE UPDATE!
dazzlingrockstar chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Damn! I can't wait until i can read the rest! Really good _
Jasper's Girl 4life chapter 8 . 1/13/2011
plz plz plz update soon because i love this story and want to read the rest
xq1227 chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
oh please.. Edward deserves better than that bitchy Mary Sue.. let Jasper have that self insert waste of space. Edward could do sooo much better. *BARF BARF*
wendy1969 chapter 8 . 5/3/2010
will u eva update this story
dragangirl8 chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
awesome nighty night
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